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beat was tight.. i like it...ya flow was different than i heard on this site... lyrics were cool, i like ya style son.... nice production right here.. keep it up homie!
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thanks for the feed man.
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Cool rhyme sheme, Chorus is pretty dope ahah...pretty melow song though, nice drop homie.
I like the staccato delivery in this one. Wow, second verse flow is killin it! I've heard a couple tracks by you and there all dope. No exception here. I really like the way you write. You've got good inner rhyme schmes and nice wording to set up bars. The hook is dope on some real hip hop. I wish the beat had a little more in the hook to support it. Kinda simplistic hook, but it's nice, I just wish the beat complemented it a little more. When I listen to you I get the vibe of a new age tribe. Nice track man!
RTF: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...var=&p=7939816
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thanks for the feed man!
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I think this is the one I checked out last night... Would have posted a response then but I had the wifey in my ear.
Anyways, shit was pretty dope man. Sounds like you've really started to develop into yourself as an mc. Are you using a pop filter? Flow was pretty sick actually. Kind of have that true emcee feel about the lyrics. All in all, good stuff my man.
Keep at it.
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Thanks for the feed, and I used a quick noise reduction, simple graphic, parametric equilizer, then a simple reverb.
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Production is pretty dope, kinda diff but i'm feeling it for sure. Verses are pretty dope, quality is real good plus the flow is interesting how your flipping it, reminds me somewhat of concious rap lyrically. Chorus is kind of generic but still goes good, maybe add some more melody/harmonies on it, but again the whole thing is really dope.
Good shit man, i'm a fan. Keep it movin'.....
thanks for the feed bro.
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No doubt man, hit me back on my track if u can homie...Originally Posted by Self: The Bluest Eye
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...037/index.html
likin the vibe on this one...feel like the flow u chose went well with the "bouncy" beat...good lyrically as well
thanks for all the feed. keep it comin.
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upin.
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uppin. hittin all links tomorrow.
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