Ten lines
Due in 1 hour and half
house rules
O' By the way
KingMe
LatinFlow
Hypnotistic
Ten lines
Due in 1 hour and half
house rules
O' By the way
KingMe
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whats this o by the way...neways CHECK
ay man please give me another hour, i had to do some shit real quick. id appreciate it. thanks
fucka latin invading space, i could sit down & win this in a blurr
coz he couldnt get his point across the Lines, if he was taggin his own signature
i got punches in store for you, from start to finish its all misdirections
& i dont think lad's style could stand out, if he was shoppin in the kids section
im exercising my rights to use all my lines, in the end just to have something
and its sad he couldnt have a tinFlow, if he left all the faucets running
this dude's starting a movement, & he's gettin mad @ the trash he's become
so i suggested to Compact* himself, so we can put a dent in this problem
im sorry but i gotta let the truth be known, that this dude's uper fake
coz he's never be public with women, even if he took a whore out on a date
*for u retards Compact as in compactor and compact/calm pack
/Robbery
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Kid dont mean to sound cruel but your ran out of fuel
texting against this flow you need a masters in grammar school
I do this rapper like engineers do, FIFO*
his forehead hits the floor so fast youd think hes idolizing with a Kowtow*
Man, I see your styles as listings a la carte
put them in a shopping cart so my stomach takes its carbs apart
In a staged freestyle he would be a no show
because mixing up with "fruits" is all Hyp-no*
And damn this fools stinks from North to south
he only spits shit, thats what you call from ass-to-mouth
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*FIFO, first in first out, first punch first KO.
*Kowtow, look it up in a picture, google.
*Hypnotic, the drink mixture of fruits.[/SIZE]
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i got punches in store for you, from start to finish its all misdirections
& i dont think lad's style could stand out, if he was shoppin in the kids section
vs
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Latin didnt have a good punch or concept at all in his whole verse. elevate fam.
Hypno had an okayish bar, but the others were too basic. u gettin the hang of
set ups but make them witty. remember that if its the first thing to come to your
mind, then its too simple....
v. hypno
Latin u've improved man like these lines from what u used to put outOriginally Posted by LatinFlow
I see u got multies down better and wordplay
Flow 3\5
Nameplay 4\5
Multies 3\5
Wordplay 3\5
Punches 2\5
Total 15\25
Flow 4\5
Nameplay none
Wordplay 4\5
Multies 4\5
Punches 3\5
Total 15\25
V goes to Hypno for better punches and better verse all together
fucka latin invading space, i could sit down & win this in a blurr
coz he couldnt get his point across the Lines, if he was taggin his own signature
i got punches in store for you, from start to finish its all misdirections
& i dont think lad's style could stand out, if he was shoppin in the kids section
im exercising my rights to use all my lines, in the end just to have something
and its sad he couldnt have a tinFlow, if he left all the faucets running
vs.
nada
lat, elevate.. make a punch! impact it.. Hyp got this in the bag.. one-sided
2 FUAX KRU
Check My Museq
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a very onsided battle, latin again you need to grow a better structure and work on more intricate punch lines
hypno - stretched verse, but again enough to take it down
both keep elevating
hypno doing just fine, just got some fine tuning to do
latin, got alot of elevating to do, but keep on it
v. Hyp
"Ready? go! sat where the old cardboard city folk
swap tales with heads like every other penny throw"
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im exercising my rights to use all my lines, in the end just to have something
and its sad he couldnt have a tinFlow, if he left all the faucets running
this dude's starting a movement, & he's gettin mad @ the trash he's become
so i suggested to Compact* himself, so we can put a dent in this problem
^ Both were a little forced... compact/CALM PACK don't sound the same tbh, and tinFLOW/Faucet runnin, I dont think faucets are made of tin, but I know where you were going with that... your only some what decent'ish bars althou, they were a little forced, they were still some what effective punches...
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nothing
Latin, work on your concepts, execute on them, you had some decent ish ideas, just failed to execute on them bruh, try an drop some witty shit, make fun of your opponent basically... you feel me?
v/Hyp
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