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    I'ma Let Dudes Know...

    Alright let me get at them.....

    alot of bum niggas try to be me but know that you'll never see me
    cause when i drop my lines they're iller than most rhymes

    I can kick ya in the mouth , leave ya red like fall did
    shit papparazzi's get at me for candids

    Poppin lids and poppin dumb ass kids is what i do best
    keep fuckin with me and i'll leave 12 shot wounds in your upper chest

    The words that come out aren't words i jus mouth
    I know how to roll up blunts cause i was raised down south
    Gettin loud ? i'ma drop ya faster than a roller coaster stunt
    I'll make sure you die godfather style , pop ya ass in the trunk


    I'm ill as a mothafucka , kinda like the swine
    Ha i'm like a bomb i'm blowin up ya bitches phone like a landmine
    Like a body count i'm stackin up niggas , Like my boys do i'll just pull out my nine and let loose on the trigga.


    Whoever wants to beef with me go ahead , I'll do like a dragon and spit fire
    Just know I ain't safe to play with i'll cut niggas up with sharp barbed wire

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    Re: I'ma Let Dudes Know...

    alot of bum niggas try to be me but know that you'll never see me
    cause when i drop my lines they're iller than most rhymes
    Simple...but ok. could have split it into 2 bars tho with a few xtra words tossed in
    I can kick ya in the mouth , leave ya red like fall did
    shit papparazzi's get at me for candids
    Like it
    Poppin lids and poppin dumb ass kids is what i do best
    keep fuckin with me and i'll leave 12 shot wounds in your upper chest
    ehh coulda been better
    The words that come out aren't words i jus mouth
    I know how to roll up blunts cause i was raised down south
    Gettin loud ? i'ma drop ya faster than a roller coaster stunt
    I'll make sure you die godfather style , pop ya ass in the trunk
    First bar....not that good....2nd one i liked tho
    I'm ill as a mothafucka , kinda like the swine
    Ha i'm like a bomb i'm blowin up ya bitches phone like a landmine
    aight
    Like a body count i'm stackin up niggas , Like my boys do i'll just pull out my nine and let loose on the trigga.
    such a simple rhyme...but you worked it
    Whoever wants to beef with me go ahead , I'll do like a dragon and spit fire
    Just know I ain't safe to play with i'll cut niggas up with sharp barbed wire
    couldve had a better ending

    overall ok. work on your vocab and having proper structure in your verses (i.e. line length)
    also id like 2 see your skill with something other than a rant/hate verse....but this wasnt bad

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    Re: I'ma Let Dudes Know...

    alright , i'll definitly work on the areas that need work. And i'ma try to slow down on the hate/rant thing. anyways thanks for replying

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    Re: I'ma Let Dudes Know...

    This could have been titled SerenadeforCock

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    Re: I'ma Let Dudes Know...

    Tight rap but still I am clueless and have nothing. I don't know who you are.
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