Hypnotistic vs BragadociousPoetry

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Ten lines
due in one hour
^after check
House Rules
Check.

[Uncle Sam]

Check!

[Uncle Sam]

Listen, this boy is barely at his first R rated movie age
Poopy stage.. Wants to see his first ever boobies stage
Intense feelings of depression wash over u like a torrential storm
U feel like that now wait till I get into my god of rage form
Collapse ur lungs leave ur brain in a siezure at my leizure
Leave u in a coma in my Sonoma, wearin ur 2pac tshirt
“Wee GORE!” leave u covered in “shells” by the sea shore
Have his life going the wrong way like a fuckin detour!
He say he gone beat me, retreat me, deplete me?.. Haha
U luv rap? Then it’s a bad romance like lady gaga

[Extortion]

This time i dont even need the pen and pad, to put this fool to shame
coz its ez to get personal, when theres some many letters to his name
you drop only flat lines, we could just say ur ass is on the pavement
coz bruh dont take this seriously, this net work aint going to pay rent...
its not a shocker, we all knew your girl was a coverup, faggot
so the only lipstick you'll get from me, is that of a punchfull static...
lyrically brag's dead, im surprised he can even rile up any noise.....
coz he complains a lot, all you gotta do is wind him up like a toy
i know you re-hearsed for this, but its still my quick practiced murder
coz the only way u'll ever be on top of things<----laying on ur attic's girder..

CHECKMATE...

[Skepto]

you drop only flat lines, we could just say ur ass is on the pavement
coz bruh dont take this seriously, this net work aint going to pay rent...


vs


Listen, this boy is barely at his first R rated movie age
Poopy stage.. Wants to see his first ever boobies stage

overall Hypno took this one cuz he actually had a decent concept....poet the only reason i even qouted your line is that shit was fuckin funny made me laugh but i wasnt like hahaha o damn that got him it just made me laugh that you said poopy....but anyway up your game up both yall hypno ive seen you do better then this you had alotta misses in here and poet you need to develop the idea of a punch

hypno gmv

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=430900
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=430885

[MV]

BragadociousPoetry
Listen, this boy is barely at his first R rated movie age
Poopy stage.. Wants to see his first ever boobies stage
lol this made me laugh for real
Intense feelings of depression wash over u like a torrential storm
U feel like that now wait till I get into my god of rage form
no punch here
Collapse ur lungs leave ur brain in a siezure at my leizure
Leave u in a coma in my Sonoma, wearin ur 2pac tshirt
eh
“Wee GORE!” leave u covered in “shells” by the sea shore
Have his life going the wrong way like a fuckin detour!
ok
He say he gone beat me, retreat me, deplete me?.. Haha
U luv rap? Then it’s a bad romance like lady gaga
no

Hypnotistic
This time i dont even need the pen and pad, to put this fool to shame
coz its ez to get personal, when theres some many letters to his name
weak opener
you drop only flat lines, we could just say ur ass is on the pavement
coz bruh dont take this seriously, this net work aint going to pay rent...
ok
its not a shocker, we all knew your girl was a coverup, faggot
so the only lipstick you'll get from me, is that of a punchfull static...
no
lyrically brag's dead, im surprised he can even rile up any noise.....
coz he complains a lot, all you gotta do is wind him up like a toy
lol
i know you re-hearsed for this, but its still my quick practiced murder
coz the only way u'll ever be on top of things<----laying on ur attic's girder..
played concept but ok

V/Hyp
not a very strong battle imo. Hyp had better delivery and attacked more. both had a few misses.

[Abyo]

Listen, this boy is barely at his first R rated movie age
Poopy stage.. Wants to see his first ever boobies stage

vs nothing

v for hypno

[Uncle Sam]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....html?t=430978
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...94&postcount=8

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[The Incredible Hulk]

Brag
“Wee GORE!” leave u covered in “shells” by the sea shore
Have his life going the wrong way like a fuckin detour!
meh...

vs

Hyp
i know you re-hearsed for this, but its still my quick practiced murder
coz the only way u'll ever be on top of things<----laying on ur attic's girder..
hmmmm

Analysis
Brag had alot of corny/ kiddy shit... Gaga with haha? Poopie stage? WTF!? Nothing landed and the detour punch was set up badly. Hyp you were more consistent than Brag but your verse was still pretty basic & as with your last battle I didn't really get what you were getting at for the most part although I must say it was an improvement on your previous battle.

FL battle rating - 4/10

V/ Hyp

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[Jukon]

pretty weak battle..

Brag..some of your lines look like they were written by a 12 year old...come on come harder than "poopy stage" shit was funny..but not in a hard hitting punch type of way.

hypno, most of your shit was played..but it hit harder..you had a lot of real nice concepts you just need to work on wording and not fillers.

brag,
Listen, this boy is barely at his first R rated movie age
Poopy stage.. Wants to see his first ever boobies stage
“Wee GORE!” leave u covered in “shells” by the sea shore
Have his life going the wrong way like a fuckin detour!
lmfao..funny but not in the right way..and the detour line is MAD played..

hypno,
you drop only flat lines, we could just say ur ass is on the pavement
coz bruh dont take this seriously, this net work aint going to pay rent...
lyrically brag's dead, im surprised he can even rile up any noise.....
coz he complains a lot, all you gotta do is wind him up like a toy
decent..not REALLY hard hitting..but it did the job.

mvgt/ hypno
just had the better verse..more consistent and better concepts..

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