Thoughtz

[Joel Venom]

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Whats Good,

Your delivery is nice son and your beat selection was on point who made the beat? i was definetly feeling it because you make the listner really have to think keep doing ya thing

[Joel Venom]

thanks for the feed man def appreciate it.

[Joel Venom]

bumping this joint!

[Cody Nash]

sick drop man... listening... I dig this beat a lot. really weird and spacey... mellow feel. unusual delivery for you because you don't do it without that aggression very often. but this was tight man.. "detrimental, outta reach" from that part was really sick. liked that section there... overall, good listen maan...



that fallout track is sick too btw.. didn't feed but I heard it. keep doin it! get me a beat to work on with ya and I'll def get on somethin'

[OfficialTimT]

This beat was hot. and your flow was crazy on it.
You said "i scream life is a bitch but not many women differ" i thought that was hot.
Overall i think its hot. You can make it somewhere bro. Keep it up!

[Toon]

you have a nice rapping voice, i love the beat. content is nice too

[Joel Venom]

thanks for the feed guyz.

[Memphis Pro]

Beat: Bonkers!really eerie..

Intro: it is what it is..

Flow: Very clear and vocal.. nice usage of energy..

Lyrics:On point... "im tryna give back light,but my batteries out" "Food for thought goes to wage when ur mind isnt hungy" im lovin the lines and the concept..alot of free thought going thru this track.. the sample being chopped up is a nice tid bit.. but a little over extended for my taste..

Hook:the sample is a nice touch.. The talking is cool..

Overall/-this track is niice..i like the calmness of it but the focus keep me listening.. u were consistant in developing a message inna a metaphoric way.. props!!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...209/index.html

[Wi11y Na$D@Q]

for some reason the song didnt play for me? i dont kno y, so i listened to ur mixtape. that shits dope def feeling ur flow and lyrics very talented. il def be checking for u more often

[Joel Venom]

thanks pro. and you too willy. pro i gotchu on feed soon.

[SwoopTCN]

that beat is pretty siccly.

you got some lyrics, east coast style.
not my fav style of rap, but shit, you pretty good, you flippen it, an tha beat fits you well.
the second verse is dope, i dig this one, it aint so much east coast as the first one. if that makes sence... coo song

[Frank P.]

man, this is pretty dope..really feelin' this beat, wish i coulda gotten my hands on this..lyrics and everything is all there..but you're JV - RB listeners expect no less, you been dope..i'm def feelin' the message you're tryna get across as well..not to much to say outside of "dope track" homie..

keep shinin'..



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[Joel Venom]

thanks for the feed famoooo..