$Lil Saint$ vs Dr!p

[$Lil Saint$]

10-15 Lines due by today- afternoon

this is my check

[Dr!p]

when the fuck did I agree to this? I mean,i'm down,i just did'nt really have time to battle,but don't dq me,i'll drop a verse in a couple hours cuz im at work

[Dr!p]

check............................................. ...

[Dr!p]

well is it gonna be 10 or 15 lines?
fuck it,ima do 10 since you try that bull shit every battle so you get an extra 5 lines lol,we'll see who wins even when you have my shit to feed on


this niggas the equvilent,to dull ass knifes and empty clips
like a boxer wit 2 broken wrists,he swings all day and never hits
lil saint,yous a bitch,and im bout to slay your offense
dollar signs in ya name,and you don't even make cents
im str8 goin in,knife in my teeth plus these 2 guns blazin
im bout to shake the life out this bitch,like he's a fuckin hatian
you better get right homie,cuz ima send ya ass to jesus
im a survivor,man,you only "bare grillz" when you grinnin at a penis
fuck a weak bitch,i eat pussies like saint on the reg,everyday
put the heater down his throat,now how the fuck you gonna pray

[Dr!p]

oh shit,I almost forgot
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...163/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...169/index.html

[$Lil Saint$]

Im gonna fuck this Nigga up, bitch I aint Lying,end his career Next stop Catalog Buying
i make ya momma my ride,put a saddle on that bitch I pulla harry potter,she play with my golden snitch


ya think ya got flow,ya aint got shit my jizz on ya moms face,maybe thats why she call ya Drip
Imma Murder your Rhymes,nigga you gonna be Wishing I wouldn’t of checked in,you rap worst then rhymebad,coulda swore he was your indentical Twin, my rhymes are contagious boom now ya Sick,Dr!p The fag Got owned Now he sucking dick,His bitch’s I be flipping, I Pwned him now he’s getting Butt fucked for a living ,While the only thing he is even remotely good at is Spitting (Gay joke) Gay ass fag, im throwing Punchs at the Douche Like he was my Fucking Punching Bag
Get fucked Bitch, I’ll make your Shit Look like it came out the gutter,its sucks but ill leave that up to u that’s your Bread and Butter fuck you bitch I cut up your dough like I was Using a Cookie cutter,Your Flow don’t Have any Style,your Rhyme stink you need to pick up some Dial
Knock,knock on my Hammer im the Judge and your in trail Put your Bitch ass in dat Slammer
Nigga needs to go back to Pre school its called the rule of grammar Greasy asS Whore Like, Pam, but with my Glamour, you say my Wrists Are broken, And I cant Make a Hit, that May be true but you can sure as hell Make a Lick you say you eat Pussies U should be Eating ur self hell’ you said it

[Dr!p]

lol,feedin,over spittin like a bitch and no links either. you tha shit man. uppin

[The Incredible Hulk]

lil saint,yous a bitch,and im bout to slay your offense
dollar signs in ya name,and you don't even make cents
im str8 goin in,knife in my teeth plus these 2 guns blazin
im bout to shake the life out this bitch,like he's a fuckin hatian

vs

Alot of stretched ass lines with a horrible structure (nothing quotable)

Analysis
One sided battle tbh due to the fact Lil saint's verse was horribly structured & at times it annoyed me to even try and find where the rhyme/punch was.

V/ Dr!p

Drop a fair vote.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...113/index.html

[Dahnk]

lil saint,yous a bitch,and im bout to slay your offense
dollar signs in ya name,and you don't even make cents
im str8 goin in,knife in my teeth plus these 2 guns blazin
im bout to shake the life out this bitch,like he's a fuckin hatian


vs.



ya think ya got flow,ya aint got shit my jizz on ya moms face,maybe thats why she call ya Drip

Wasn't a punch, I know, but it was the only thing that I could follow really..
Should came with a nice punch after this set up.. but I couldnt see anything that might have connected..

This battle was weak really, Dr!p did just enough here , had MUCH better structure..
His punches were decent.. had some fluency to em.
Lil Saint, try gettin rid of some of the filler you put in between rhymes.. Shorten them lines up nigz..
Hard as a maffff to follow.
No hate Saint, you got potential, just need to focus ya verse a bit more.. Fine tune that shit homie! you'll get it.


Vote = Dr!p


RTF on one or both of these..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...954/index.html

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...004/index.html

Thanks!

[Advantage]

this niggas the equvilent,to dull ass knifes and empty clips
like a boxer wit 2 broken wrists,he swings all day and never hits
witty

vs

nada

overall saint your structure is horrible. work on stretched lines
drip work on delivery and concepts

v/drip

[Fenci]

Neither hugely inspiring, saint u lost me at
Gay ass fag, im throwing Punchs at the Douche Like he was my Fucking Punching Bag.
Captain Obvious
Drip had the one good broken wrists line, unfortunately with a messier delivery saint couldnt beat it. I can sum this battle up - fag,ass,gay,bitch,dick. Look out a window or something, or read a book.
V/ Drip

[$Lil Saint$]

Wow i must really suck haha, oh and Bert Fuck off you Bitch ass Pussy

[Dr!p]

lol..;..........uppin

[$Lil Saint$]

idc what they say, good battle dr!p

[Malice]

Dr!p:
lil saint,yous a bitch,and im bout to slay your offense
dollar signs in ya name,and you don't even make cents
^great line, the rest of your verse wasnt on this level but i was feelin this alot

vs

Saint:
your structure is terrible, wayy stretched, gotta trim out the filler and then your concepts wouldnt come off as forced or anything like that

Breakdown
basically dr!p had a verse that was well constructed, had one devasting punch, and a few average ones through out, kept his head above water for the most part, but like i said for saint, you need to trim down alot and keep it short and sweet, stretching your lines is suicide to a battle in text, its not like audio where you can speed up your delivery if need be, find an acceptable format and stick to it

v/dr!p