Airplanes (New Mixtape Dropping tomo May 7)

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[YOUTUBE]f0BOjbyIqrw[/YOUTUBE]

Just a verse with a bit of an intro.

The Covers
drops tomo, May 7th


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...967/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...930/index.html

[Wordz AhGod.]

not really feeling your voice/flow.. lyrics aint too bad but your flow goes off badly on a few parts.. your voice sounds a bit too strained or forced. over all.. not a bad track but needs some minor to major improvements fam. no hate. I just figured Id peep this cos some one in scytso said you was dope.

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Word, thanks for the opinion man, but where my flow fall off?

[Wordz AhGod.]

I heard it fall off twice where you had to speed up to catch up to the beat.. it was REALLY noticeable too.

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Truee

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ups.

Download mixtape

http://www.mediafire.com/?kovcmmzznmw

[Aargh Kelly]

this was cool. I like the energy but the flow was off twice.

the classic shit but my flow spastic?
and..
and when you said "conjuring a storm"

just because two words kinda rhyme doesnt mean its always going to flow well.
just my .02 cents

but overall, it was a decent drop.

[Joel Venom]

peeped it earlier on the tape all i have to really say is try having a little bit more energy and slow up your breathe control that will help it much better but other than that the track is good work. keep it up pox.

[AyitsJB]

ya got mad energy no denying that, i think turn your voice down just a tad...good flow but at sometimes ya try to keep up which its noticeable, i like the lyrics though they are legit, this beat is played out though so i'd choose a different thing to remix overall good but short...maybe make it longer but i like it good shit

feed me back
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...45#post7646645

[Troy Murray]

this was nice man..
flow was cool..
vocals were a bit loud for my taste but its cool
this was nice tho man keep it up

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Word. Thanks homies.

[eturnalnew]

good emotion. lyrics are alright. my only real problem is the production, and the vocals are 2 loud.

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What's good Apox...

I see you developing your style a little more and more...I still think your too loud..but your writing is good and its dope to see yourself getting down like this at your age, by 25 man you'll be sick as fuck, and thats when all the fun happens...beats straight, you ripped it rpetty good without sounding as soft as this beat though...

[Dox Phonic]

the beat is nice man... there's a nice little passion in your lyric man... a little loud maybe... I'm happy to see you elevate... Like I was back when you was bullshit... now you = >bullshit
Keep elevatin man... some minor issues here and there but nothing crippling.