West: Cry Vs. King

[Leonidas]

Battles set on Monday
Check IN's due by Wednesday (or DQ)
Punches due on Friday by 11:59 P.M. EST
Voting ends on Sunday, 11:59 P.M. EST

[King]

k...

[Cody Nash]

balls

[Cody Nash]

NBA suggests that he balls.. but most of us beggin' he falls
holdin' down text like a paperweight... and he won't fuckin let it evolve

[King]

Cry aint gangster but he's a maid, man n I'll beast him
I'll put my foot down...soon as he's done vacuuming underneath 'em


gl C to the ry

[~feed-back~]

both were nice in concept but neither had an impact. it felt like they both went the poetic route.

v- cry...

i've seen too many made/maid lines that all end the same way

[Verbal Hologram]

Cry flipped King's holdin down the text catchphrase, so it hit on more of a personal level....btw I've seen the maid/made flip before so it wasn't as original imo.

V/Cry

[A. Diction]

Cry's was decent, but I thought King had a nice flip to an old concept. The maidman/made man concept is played but that was just the set up, I thought the execution and punch was very nice and had the lulz factor.

V/ King

[Erun.]

Vote - King.....I thought it was worded better and it made me snicker.

[Slayerr]

concepts were meh fromboth but king worded his well and crys didnt rhyme as well as it could've. close but i think kings came off cleaner.
v/king

[The Incredible Hulk]

V/ King.

[Slowhands]

v- King, Cry would have had it but the end result of his punch came off kinda like a statement, King had a meh concept but it still hit

[Soule]

Vote Cry, even though it kinda seemed like he used two different concepts in his bar. The ending sting was still enough to get the job done imo.

[Leonidas]

King Wins