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    End of Evolution

    They woke up next to the world
    The boy opened the eyes of a girl
    The girl created a heart for the boy
    They woke up next to the world.

    The sun was a brilliant pearl
    The sky held millions of dreams for the girl
    They created a love, a brilliant love
    They fell deep into the world

    The dust was created from skin
    Skin that seemed so permanent
    They immersed themselves with endless skin
    and the love made into dust from it

    He wanted warmth
    She couldn’t keep him warm enough
    She held on to him
    She couldn’t hold him close enough

    The sun was gone
    The shooting stars were satellites
    The fog outside was smoke that night
    The night became the murder site

    They walked next to the world
    Until the boy walked from the girl
    He created a different world
    One that wasn’t right for her

    They made it through so many storms
    They’ve found each other lost once more
    They made it through so many storms
    They’ve lost the will to be found once more

    They were stuck inside a world
    She wanted to be his ideal girl
    He wanted to be free from her
    He was stuck inside her ideal world

    She trapped his heart inside her own
    She created an improper way of love
    Where his ideas influenced her unwritten world
    So the boy was unwritten from the illiterate girl

    She wanted a brilliant sun
    But she melted the face of her world of love
    She caught on fire with the passionate drug
    While he floated on air from the toxic one

    They fell asleep inside the world
    They lost each other’s souls
    They dreamt of different, separate worlds
    The love was finally gone

    They’re destroying a brilliant world
    The boy is shutting the eyes of a girl
    The girl constricts the heart of the boy
    They’ve destroyed they’re brilliant world
















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    Re: End of Evolution

    Wow that was deep, well put together
    my fav part

    She wanted a brilliant sun
    But she melted the face of her world of love
    She caught on fire with the passionate drug
    While he floated on air from the toxic one

    They fell asleep inside the world
    They lost each other’s souls
    They dreamt of different, separate worlds
    The love was finally gone
    wow you bin through some shit lots of feeling

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    Re: End of Evolution

    thanx for the feed, anyone else?

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