I has had been writing for an almost two years and nothing are good on my skills yet. And I never battle onto anybody yet. I don't want to enter in and looks stupid. I want to write more and see if I can get the feedback by my any weakness I made... Thank you for reading this time...
Here I wrote...
Verses:
I'll rip this fool apart, into many pieces of notes/
Quit whining brat, your spit from a cancer heart/
Get off the game, my style is all over the flame/
to set a danger explosion, l roll violent in a spit/
Don't let me catch u, l get your head very nervous/
You be sweat and curious, as into Mario King Kong/
You broke as low pennies under da prices of candy/
You not of beast enough, l take down like wolverine/
I put a bullet in your lung, takes the health away/
You struggle in a rap tongue, It's time to zip it up/
You are whack outside a fight, fell on the ground/
You got smack by da innocent children are bright/
I dunno... you tell me what I should change.. =/
