I'm pretty new to rapping and I just want to know how I could improve.
I miss the old days when I flew kites
now I stay awake watching old fights on cold nights..
Used to hold tight for my whole life on park rides
Now I don't grip to try to fall and die.
Cause life's slipping, I'm held like vice gripping,
I see fiending demons, laughing, and drink sipping.
Past thoughts driven, I think of time machines
Trapped like sardines, I want time like the magazine.
Memories are my gasoline, thoughts of lost cabbage
Wanna move on, but stuck in place cause of bad traffic.
Gonna blast my way though this, I gotta grab it,
Mark my path as I walk, I'm gonna tag it.
Shed this visual fluid unlike others like maverick,
Gotta release this emotion cause I can't sell it or bag it.
Hell is more sadness than pain, where the dead inhabit,
More pain to drop this piece than a bad habit.
