hmmm, to me Mime came extremely Cliche, the Only line I was kinda feeling was the CA Los. which was a borderline forced concept in my book. ALIEN had 3 lines which stood out to me, being the throat muscle, invisible rope, an mime/in a box lines
aside from that even his unquotables were clever. To me Mime still got some ways to go, but seems to have a decent idea how to battle.
v/ALIEN
Not Impressed
4-2
Last vote?
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
I'll relate this to his location, ALIEN faggot how im beating you boss,
cause your reppin' a fag county, where you'll always... C.A. Los.
ur user title shows you like pop 'Idol', so watch how this bitch'll shout,
cuz he'll be known for having the 'X' factor... after i cross the faggot out.
we've all seen this fags verse, and we all took the hint from advisement,
that, fag couldn't be 'pro active'... if he was the 'after picture for the advertisment'
vs
You never using your vocal cords and shit that really ain't no trouble Mime,
You don't need to use the muscles in your throat... I got your girl's workin double time
Not wise to battle me... fuck ya whinin ass my nine'll blast this geek
And I'll end up puttin Mime in a box like day 1 at the Mime Academy
both came ok..ive seen you drop better outter space man maybe you didnt expect him to drop that good..lol...Mime just took this one to me with better and more cool punches...no hate
v-mime
Faze and Jookz dq'ed for crew votes.
Hush dq'ed for crew vote.
concidering i was the first person to vote i wont take it as you was referring to me chain votingOriginally Posted by A. Karpis
shut the fuck up.
freepost in a battle thats not yours again and I ban you for 2 weeks.
I'm lookin strong lately... and I wont stop til this rook is gone...
Meaning, I'll be hangin Mime with the imaginary rope he's pullin on
meh, this was good but not a strong punch, your wording was lazy.
weak verse for real.. underestimated..
vs
I'll relate this to his location, ALIEN faggot how im beating you boss,
cause your reppin' a fag county, where you'll always... C.A. Los.
wording wasn't too good but not a bad personal really. kinda creative
ur user title shows you like pop 'Idol', so watch how this bitch'll shout,
cuz he'll be known for having the 'X' factor... after i cross the faggot out.
This is an old ass concept but its one I haven't seen in for ever.. might be cos its mad old though lol
well, I guess this one is easier to judge then usual.. Alien didn't come with anything and expected his opponent to do the same thing. Mime's verse heavily reminds me of one of the exact way that I write even in his form of wording and everything so I was more comfertable reading his shit. He had a few ok shit but some played shit too and some not so good wording that kept him from having more quotables. He also over used the term fag by saying it like 7 times in one verse. but consistancy rules apply and in this case Mime was the more consistant battler so...
v/Mime
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when i voted he wasn't in my crew, i didnt even know him trialing out or anything...
BS..
let me take you to the movies.
Up'n^
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
Up'n^
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
Can't break down your name completely, is this guy serious...
I'm letting you know now... ALIEN is better than MIME, period.
Okay opener, could have been better.
I'm lookin strong lately... and I wont stop til this rook is gone...
Meaning, I'll be hangin Mime with the imaginary rope he's pullin on
Nice. I actually liked this. Wasn't really hard hitting but I got a laugh from it.
You never using your vocal cords and shit that really ain't no trouble Mime,
You don't need to use the muscles in your throat... I got your girl's workin double time
Nice. The wording helped & the playing off his name is nice.
Because Mimes don't talk... don't even look at me faggot...
If your job is not to speak... then you shouldn't be rappin!
Meh, could have been better. I liked the set up just the follow up wasn't that strong.
Not wise to battle me... fuck ya whinin ass my nine'll blast this geek
And I'll end up puttin Mime in a box like day 1 at the Mime Academy
Okay closer. The follow up was solid just the set up could have been done differently to suit it & give it the anticipation needed.
vs
I'll relate this to his location, ALIEN faggot how im beating you boss,
cause your reppin' a fag county, where you'll always... C.A. Los.
Eh, not working for me as an opener or a punch. San Fran. is considered the fag city. Not L.A. I see what you were going for but it just didn't work for me.
keyboard aint' doing you good cunt, i'll have you filling prison places,
having this fag behind my bars... for his shitty forced entry cases.
Meh. The set up was a bit odd given how you jumped from his keyboard to prison without any real transition between the two, the follow up was awkward. It's like you're going for prison jokes but you're not delivering them properly.
cunt u ain't getting any 'fame', i'll fucking kill this 'american dad'
n have fag draw dicks the rest of his career... cuz his verse is 'super bad'
What is with you & fags? But this is decent, not exactly hard hitting.
ur user title shows you like pop 'Idol', so watch how this bitch'll shout,
cuz he'll be known for having the 'X' factor... after i cross the faggot out.
Okay seriously....with the fags...stop. Okay punch, could have been better.
we've all seen this fags verse, and we all took the hint from advisement,
that, fag couldn't be 'pro active'... if he was the 'after picture for the advertisment'
Meh closer. Wasn't feeling it. Also, stop using the word fag so much. It's one thing to be homophobic, it's another to vent it an obscene amount of times.
v.Alien-His punches were a bit better along with wording and set up. Also his use of nameplay.
But...
He can never touch her again
#BaseBoyz
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iup'n^
I make the type of pieces that make Jesus say God damn - Cole
Can't break down your name completely, is this guy serious...
I'm letting you know now... ALIEN is better than MIME, period.
weak...
I'm lookin strong lately... and I wont stop til this rook is gone...
Meaning, I'll be hangin Mime with the imaginary rope he's pullin on
eh...
You never using your vocal cords and shit that really ain't no trouble Mime,
You don't need to use the muscles in your throat... I got your girl's workin double time
weak...
Because Mimes don't talk... don't even look at me faggot...
If your job is not to speak... then you shouldn't be rappin!
weak...
Not wise to battle me... fuck ya whinin ass my nine'll blast this geek
And I'll end up puttin Mime in a box like day 1 at the Mime Academy
ok...
vs
I'll relate this to his location, ALIEN faggot how im beating you boss,
cause your reppin' a fag county, where you'll always... C.A. Los.
you don't need the dots... eh...
keyboard aint' doing you good cunt, i'll have you filling prison places,
having this fag behind my bars... for his shitty forced entry cases.
i read this 3 times and couldn't find a punch...
cunt u ain't getting any 'fame', i'll fucking kill this 'american dad'
n have fag draw dicks the rest of his career... cuz his verse is 'super bad'
hell no... those shows don't even have anything to do w/ each other... it's like you were just throwing names in... lol
ur user title shows you like pop 'Idol', so watch how this bitch'll shout,
cuz he'll be known for having the 'X' factor... after i cross the faggot out.
eh... seen these before...
we've all seen this fags verse, and we all took the hint from advisement,
that, fag couldn't be 'pro active'... if he was the 'after picture for the advertisment'
seen these too... and the diss is the before picture... lol...
nothing good here...
vote Alien
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...110/index.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...109/index.html
hit the god damn link kids.
Can't break down your name completely, is this guy serious...
I'm letting you know now... ALIEN is better than MIME, period.
[too bland. statement.]
I'm lookin strong lately... and I wont stop til this rook is gone...
Meaning, I'll be hangin Mime with the imaginary rope he's pullin on
[i liked it. creative.]
You never using your vocal cords and shit that really ain't no trouble Mime,
You don't need to use the muscles in your throat... I got your girl's workin double time
[this was ok.]
Because Mimes don't talk... don't even look at me faggot...
If your job is not to speak... then you shouldn't be rappin!
[horrible.]
Not wise to battle me... fuck ya whinin ass my nine'll blast this geek
And I'll end up puttin Mime in a box like day 1 at the Mime Academy
[just corny.]
vs
I'll relate this to his location, ALIEN faggot how im beating you boss,
cause your reppin' a fag county, where you'll always... C.A. Los.
[it's alrightish.]
keyboard aint' doing you good cunt, i'll have you filling prison places,
having this fag behind my bars... for his shitty forced entry cases.
[naw. bad.]
cunt u ain't getting any 'fame', i'll fucking kill this 'american dad'
n have fag draw dicks the rest of his career... cuz his verse is 'super bad'
[maad random. not feeling it.]
ur user title shows you like pop 'Idol', so watch how this bitch'll shout,
cuz he'll be known for having the 'X' factor... after i cross the faggot out.
[played man.]
we've all seen this fags verse, and we all took the hint from advisement,
that, fag couldn't be 'pro active'... if he was the 'after picture for the advertisment'
[ehh almost.]
v/ALIEN. he was more creative.. better wording/execution. poor battle on both accounts.
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