10 lines
due in an hour
10 lines
due in an hour
check
fuck you
your so painfull all you ever do is tell lies
watch me inject venom so he od's and dies
so do us all a favour...and just press backspace on your verse
cause compared to the last guy i battled...your shit is worse
im one to hit OM ledgend status so i guess noone here has any doubts
your writtens make me feel like i could get a nom...and punch his lights out
dude your not hot...well maybe with a handful of guy's ass'ss
cause your as dope...as retard kids in special education classes
this faggot was dropping and rolling before stop and stare
watch my fist collapse his lungs...like patients in intensive care
Check...
I wonder if you forgot I'm suppose to check in also? I'll drop in a few minutes, also don't pm me talking shit, i'm new here.
quick key
Yo my flow is so viscious ill roast you hoes spitten
if its beef? I'll run up like mobile phone minutes
don't come and boast bitchin u rappin hotter then smoke
when u couldnt come clean jacking off with the soap
when rappin? stop it im dope, or get slapped on the floor
this nigga fucking sucks like african whores
I'll blast at his core, and smack his throat
it's like comedy theifs, JACKS A JOKE!
blah blah fuck this fag, its dicks hes copping
call his verse diareer full of SHIT hes dropping.
don't come and boast bitchin u rappin hotter then smoke
when u couldnt come clean jacking off with the soap
vs nothing really...
no offense meant guys but this was all kinda basic
keep on keepin on though
V/venom
oh yea and...RTF
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...510/index.html
upppp
jackel
your so painfull all you ever do is tell lies
watch me inject venom so he od's and dies
ok. 1/5
so do us all a favour...and just press backspace on your verse
cause compared to the last guy i battled...your shit is worse
haha 2/5
im one to hit OM ledgend status so i guess noone here has any doubts
your writtens make me feel like i could get a nom...and punch his lights out
ok. 1/5
dude your not hot...well maybe with a handful of guy's ass'ss
cause your as dope...as retard kids in special education classes
lol. 2/5
this faggot was dropping and rolling before stop and stare
watch my fist collapse his lungs...like patients in intensive care
ha. 2/5
jackel - 8/25
You already gettin' better with punches, just keep workin' at it.
-veNom
Yo my flow is so viscious ill roast you hoes spitten
if its beef? I'll run up like mobile phone minutes
ok. 2/5
don't come and boast bitchin u rappin hotter then smoke
when u couldnt come clean jacking off with the soap
eh, ok. 2/5
when rappin? stop it im dope, or get slapped on the floor
this nigga fucking sucks like african whores
no. 1/5
I'll blast at his core, and smack his throat
it's like comedy theifs, JACKS A JOKE!
eh. 1/5
blah blah fuck this fag, its dicks hes copping
call his verse diareer full of SHIT hes dropping.
eh. 1/5
-veNom - 7/25
You got the right idea... Just come harder with punches as well...
Overall - You both are pretty evenly matched but one dude threw more hits.
Vote - jackel
i think this battle was mostly one sided
jackel had some aight lines but nothin that really stuck out
venom had a couple good punches which i believe were:
1-Yo my flow is so viscious ill roast you hoes spitten
if its beef? I'll run up like mobile phone minutes
And
2-don't come and boast bitchin u rappin hotter then smoke
when u couldnt come clean jacking off with the soap
So my vote is Venom
You dont talk shit but your mouth might blow ass
fuck wit Timbo and ill Kimbo Slice your ass
yo... do not freepost in my battles please^^^^^
uppppp
uppppppp
uppppppppppppppppppp
upppppppp
i liked how you started out with FUCK YOU...
rofl..
anyways..venom got this imo... a few decent bars like the cell line. most of this battle was played with like pedos
Posting Rules
