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Thread: Wheres Hollywood?

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    Wheres Hollywood?

    Wheres Hollywood?
    By Katana



    This cargo train of ambition,
    already left the station before
    but the prism of light it cast.
    Made me feel special,
    If only for a moment.

    Sepia sunsets stolen away
    under a banner of stars and stripes.
    Show me the way to Hollywood
    I hear rumours that the pied piper
    arrived before schedule.
    A trail of rodents in pursuit.

    Welcome.

    Lime-light is but a studio lamp
    - as bitter as the name
    anorexia is in season right now,
    and citrus must be high in calories,
    for people are growing fat with greed.

    Californication? Dream on.
    A legion of semi-identical dolls
    now stand at the gates of hell,
    the plastic shells of all those
    that they've trampled upon,
    crumble beneath high-heels.

    But Hollywood always told me;

    * It was the place to be.
    * That sex sells well.
    * The first kiss tells you everything.


    And Hollywood lied...
    Rejecting my passionate embrace.

    A monotone rainbow remains
    will I find my dream at the end?
    Or another angry leprechan
    to steal away my true colours?

    And I'll chase him screaming,
    GIVE ME BACK MY DIGNITY!!

    Make my movie if you dare
    Don't worry if it's rated 18+
    I'll let you watch for free
    It'll just be another porno hit
    knocking me back to the ground.
    Bruise my ego a little more.

    Broken mirror, please attempt
    to repair this broken Image.

    I don't want this
    to be remembered as...
    ...My Song of Disappointment
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    Re: Wheres Hollywood?

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    Re: Wheres Hollywood?

    kat this was power i felt in your words i can actually feel like you are speaking this to me or a crowd wording was excellent i like the titile choice that was original i love the way you be so straight forward when you write i can feel your words i actually want to hear you speak this but loved this piece enjoyed the read. keep it up =)
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    Re: Wheres Hollywood?

    Damn. This is beautiful. At the begining, however, ur wording was more careful and deliberate. After that, u almost merely communicate the the idea. I however loved how it all came out. Wouldnt have it any other way. Its beautifuly satirical.

    Peace.

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