Recognition

[.Prime.]

The chorus is sung by Drake I took it out of his song Fear...The man I am talking about is Zambo Cavero..http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arturo_%22Zambo%22_Cavero

Recognition
Goes to the beat of

Yeah, can call this...a dedication
A legend who wrote sounds without hesitation
Every line that he wrote ended with exclamations
But I gotta take this and give it some meditation
October 9th the day he went up
Was the saddest day in music, I can handle it yup
But I can't handle that fact that he has no recognition
He never got approved, never needed permission
Always talked about the children who always cried
I see the tears pourin down my own eyes
I knew his lyrics contained absolutely no lies
Stayin patriotic and always spreadin his freedom
Didn't need all that money, producers he didn't need them
He sang songs that ment something like "Contigo Peru"
And I hope that yall remember, remember.... that I'm here with you too

Dont believe the lies.
Look me in my eyes.
Please dont be scared of me.
Please dont be scared of me.
I remember you.
This feeling isnt new.
So please dont be scared of me.
Please dont be scared of me.
Oh oh oh oh oh uhh.

I've been around the block and I've been rockin the shows
I be staying high just to balance out all my lows
Fans gettin made cause I wear better clothes
So now everyones leavin, losin all my bros
I figured this was a dream but maybe the fame took it
Cause now when I try to rhyme, no fans wanna book it
But in the end that shit just doesn't ever matter
I aint ever selling out, puttin my rhymes on a platter
When I rhyme it's inspired, it's not your typical thing
I don't wear silver chain and call it my bling
My thoughts are my own, never taken it from me
Maybe that's why I wont get signed by young money
I'm staying the same always know that I'm real
Spittin out deep words so everyone can feel

Dont believe the lies.
Look me in my eyes.
Please dont be scared of me.
Please dont be scared of me.
I remember you.
This feeling isnt new.
So please dont be scared of me.
Please dont be scared of me.
Oh oh oh oh oh uhh.

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[yung nothing]

Really solid piece. One piece of advice I have is the same thing you said for one of my Oms some of the rhymes seemed a bit stretched just get it to flow a little easier in a couple points and it will be hot.

[.Prime.]

uppin for feedback..

[|-GTech-|]

Cool piece, would be nice for Audio. Nice flow. I think the second verse stood out the most with meaning. Solid piece.

[.Prime.]

Thanks for the feedback man.

[.Prime.]

Uppin for more feedback please...