AOTW 10/19/2009: Winter Snow

[Brandon Cee]

I did this for the RB Shootout, was leading in points and then not enough votes came in, so it was kinda deaded. Anyhow, peep this shit. About my ex-fiance, shit was intense like Indians. Love you guys, pause. Peace.

-For Download Here-
http://www.zshare.net/audio/67114824ed9c00a9/

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Lyrics are below.

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I thought we had it all, I thought we had this
But we packed so many bags we didn't have the time to grab it
Reliving the past, and yeah, it's all a crazy has been
I should have burned my bridges along with all the sadness
But I'm taking the action and taking it back when
You were making me mad then I walked out and laughed...
And by facing the facts I'm waking my tantrum
I'm being straight up with this like I'm taking viagra
Crazy as now, I tried to love you, staying to drown
You put so many walls around you and I couldn't break any down
You'll be taking me now like a sigh of relief
Still, I won't show you mercy like messiah unleashed
Plus, he's hiding with me, wanted to try and be free
I let you go and now I'm hearing all the cries and the pleas
All the lies and deceit, why did you cheat?
You never used to look every way before you were crossing the street

Nothing has changed, our love was caught in the shuffle
Tossed with the muzzle - silenced while it's lost in the tunnel
And I would rebuttal, but there's no exception to hustle
Cause life's a big enough race without the presence of trouble
Not to mention the pride, the lies dissecting the rubble
Protecting bubbles when the middle gets ready to buckle
Steady, the stuff will change just to better the feeble
Pretending the evil's a game while we're dreading the people
Repent as an equal, divide the person - be willing
To fill their souls with a feeling that's bigger than it really
is - I want to breathe, I know the wish is mutual
it makes me feel normal when putting the YOU in usual
We could go on for days - way we're escaping the fate
But we're tracing our steps back and you're making me wait
Like the path was erased once you took a step out
Left out of the plans I couldn't leave you left out...of

Baby, my love is so true
The night is almost through
Now, what can we do?
Tomorrow's far beyond
You're where I belong
It's CRAZY that you're gone!

She called me Brandon, but I'm really just a man and
I demanded that the damage went away before it happened (to me)
See, I was happily living, but actually stricken
And everything I didn't want, but was practically given
Has changed me, it rearranged and has made me
While she created new molds that could shape me
She took me as a man - she took me as a prisoner
The home team's losing; give one to the visitors
A blizzard rolled in so much colder than her shoulders
Had to wake up, smell the coffee without opening the Folgers
Croaking - and I notice our hope dying's
A beautiful disaster like finding the Hope diamond
I tried to leave the ceremonies I woke for
Cause marriage was fake, her love's phony like folklore
Now, I prolly couldn't stand her if she paid me
Maybe she loves me, but she broke me and it's CRAZY!

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[SoundMechanic]

Really diggin this beat...the vibe on the entire track is pretty deep...diggin the hook...everything sounded nice to me...good shit man deff. keep bringin these joints.

[Cyrious]

Beat is mad dope. Agreed on the vibe, it is pretty deep. The hook is nice and relaxing. Im really feelin the lyrics, your flow is on point and your delivery is great. Song is deep, i think i miite have played this like 3 or 4 times. You kinda remind me of another underground artist i use to listen to but i cant think of the name. But yo other than that, nice track man, keep doing ya thing.

[918G]

this beat is sick, i heard in on soundclick wanted to do something with it but didnt know what to talk about but what you talking bout is real talk im liking this nice track it was dope

[Chris White]

Ayo Brandon, where the fuck was I when you made this? I sweat to fucking God this is better than any shit you've done on this site. On some real shit too, you killed this lyrically...good shit man, my brother is dopeness.

[Rhetoric]

Beat dope...hook dope..lyrics on every verse....dope....delivery dope...not much to say here BC jsut plain dope drop...

keep it up..

[K.B.]

iight so this is my 3rd time listening to this joint. Is that you on the chorus too?? Lol, if so, dammmn brano gettin his soul onnn. Ne way, to the first verse. Shyt sounds crisppp man. Quality's on point. Your flows nice so far man, and your mettas are great. "straight up like viagra" n "show no mercy like messiah...." haha, 2nd verse you open up so crazzzzy, i love this start. Your flow is sooo nice on the 2nd verse. And emotion is on point. 2nd verse tops the 1st one no doubt homie. This beat is soooo damm sick man... iight 3rd verse. Yeahhhh man, opening lines are nice as hell. Delivery on this verse is great. Man the combination of an ill flow, consistant on topic lyrics, and metaphors that always connect, everythings on this track. Shows that you embrace all the qualities a real MC should have man. No joke. Today on the radio you won't hardly hear ne1 with this kind of talent no more. It's sad... but that's why i be on this site and listenin to ya'll. You really proved yourself on this track Brandon. Good shyt, loved it.

Keep it up.

RTF @ My Life if you get the chance homie. Thanks

[|-GTech-|]

Bro nice track. great emotion, flow is on point. I was suppose to do something wit this track, you approached the flow differently. Great singing! On the hook ... Nice track overall. Keep doing ya thing.

[GT Ronic]

yo listenin,

some deep lyrics here, and the beat gives this a nice vibe to it. not feelin the beat too much, dunno just not me.

delivery could use some work, but not much, it's pretty nice, and I can tell you're getting comfy with it, so keep doin it. the flow fell off at times, but nothing super noticeable.

overall this was a pretty solid track,is that u singing? before the 3rd verse? if so good shit

when 3rd verse comes in was a dope flip, when u came in, it had me wantin more. replay value on this is pretty good, and relatable content. good drop

8/10

rtf if u can bro...
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[Brandon Heat]

pretty good joint man... probably the best I've heard you on a track... good shit.

[Soule]

You know I love this track bro, it was on my Myspace...and I voted for you in the shootout. Anyhow, onward with the second post of feedback for this damn track lmao. Beat's mad dope, and you did an amazing job singing that corus brother. Really liked the flow and lyrics. Very professional delivery, aotw easily. Smooth vibe laid out with this song man, keep it up bro.

[Godwasheeeeeeeeeeeeere]

this was beyond raw man

i dont really see how u could get much better then where you are right now, the chorus was raw the content was perfect it was sick

i nominate this for aotw

[luke illestry]

i second that notion..this was dope and heart felt i heard the pain in your verse
i bet you were reminiscing while you were recording this.

10/10 favorite piece ima d/l this shit for sure

[AlphaMetric]

is man this shit is dope, like crack....... shit I could see myself listening to this shit...... your presence is dope as fuck... love this shit......... very deep emotion..... and good production... all around very dope

[Tebo]

this was cool, hook thing was nice I liked how u added ur part in it. The verses were cool, cool metaphors. Liked the delivery n flow was solid. This was a good song I liked it. Good lyrics I liked them, nice drop Brandon man