10 lines
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this is my Check
TJC
Sänity
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I herd you were good, best rhymes and flow, best around
number one at a refugee camp, spittin, but got shot down
who did your hair, was it a stylist expert, they're nice
how was forest trails, too bad you lost your hair in a forest fire
incredible result, I agree, only when dancin like MJ
cause your wack and a fag, even after death, you worship every day
your first day at RB, it must of been like your mom's curse
but you do have a steady job right, ridin' dicks since birth
do you know the alphabet, Sänity, you know they took out the S
cause when they detected your name, they had to do a system reset
0-5? You better quit this rap game and you should do it quick
you could be in a hospital all day and still wouldn't leave sick
I know you carry your notepad everywhere but please keep it closed sir
if anyone saw your ryhmes in public you'd be charged for indecent exposure
after this battle you still gonna be askin the same question B
"who's dick do I have to ride to get a fuckin' victory?
You don't even know what a punch, none of your lines are nice
If I asked you for a punch you would respond "straight or with ice?"
and Victory Sanity will be without a doubt
the last thing TJ will C before his ass gets knocked out
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I give that to Sanity.
TJC:
I herd you were good, best rhymes and flow, best around
number one at a refugee camp, spittin, but got shot down
^ meh
who did your hair, was it a stylist expert, they're nice
how was forest trails, too bad you lost your hair in a forest fire
^ fire? nice? that ain't rhyming man
incredible result, I agree, only when dancin like MJ
cause your wack and a fag, even after death, you worship every day
^ no....because if he was MJ....we would worship him after his death....so.....swing and miss
your first day at RB, it must of been like your mom's curse
but you do have a steady job right, ridin' dicks since birth
^ meh
do you know the alphabet, Sänity, you know they took out the S
cause when they detected your name, they had to do a system reset
^ meh...
Sanity:
0-5? You better quit this rap game and you should do it quick
you could be in a hospital all day and still wouldn't leave sick
^ okay....kind of played but worded nicely
I know you carry your notepad everywhere but please keep it closed sir
if anyone saw your ryhmes in public you'd be charged for indecent exposure
^ LOL good line
after this battle you still gonna be askin the same question B
"who's dick do I have to ride to get a fuckin' victory?
^ haha...
You don't even know what a punch, none of your lines are nice
If I asked you for a punch you would respond "straight or with ice?"
^ lol okay
and Victory Sanity will be without a doubt
the last thing TJ will C before his ass gets knocked out
^ nice nameplay
This battle was pretty one sided, sanity took it off of his hands quick with the first 6-8 lines....good shit
Vote = Sanity
nothin special
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0-5? You better quit this rap game and you should do it quick
you could be in a hospital all day and still wouldn't leave sick
I know you carry your notepad everywhere but please keep it closed sir
if anyone saw your ryhmes in public you'd be charged for indecent exposure
TJC had an alright closer. i felt it but landed without much sting. other bars just lacked creativity and concepts. Vocab needs improvement
San had some old concepts but played them out good. i felt the closer had something missing in it. loved the indecent bar though...
v/ San
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tj you gotta come with more wit man. not just straight disses.. don't worry, it'll come in time. u gotta try use comparisons or one-liners i suppose. something for you to start off with u'll improve quickly. u've obviously got the drive. sanity.. ur verse was cool. the whose dick do i gotta ride line was hilarious. other than that, the indecent exposure line was coo. you got the win here. but tj, keep trying.
v/ sanity.
guys. return the vote on some battles of mine. i've soo many open =/.
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vote sanity
harder punches
better concepts
TJC...your getting there man u just need to work on ur concepts
you need some set ups relating to ur actual punch then better
executions wording and concepts wise....just keep workin on it
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