a lifetime of nothing.

[Sand]

desperate for a cause or a meaning at all.
feelings are lost or thrown all over the wall.
to drip and fall to the cold tiles of depression.
or to sit and stall and darken the mid section.
now i am currently confession i live a life of fight.
and current conditions had my future bright.
and then proceded to quickly turn out my light.
and why i really dont know as i sit and pray this night.
i used to beg for a life. but now i beg for a knife.
and to me death seems great not at all dark and scary.
today you were risen . and today i was buried.



a big part of me died today...just to let you know...


happy easter!..

[SmoKeyThaBear]

thats deep

[Dark Prophet]

nice

[Sand]

thank you for these meaningful replies.
i appreciate them.

[Sand]

upping for more.

[Orikle]

Yeah man sounds deep uh, best stuff comes from deep down, nah mean, and no-one can talk shit against it, I hear what your saying, rhyming wise, it was put together well, rhymed nicely, it was short but straight to the point, keep uppin man...

Peace Out Yo!!!!

[Sand]

up

[Av1r3x]

yeh basically wut Mead said.It wuz deep and u needed to get sum ish off ya chest.Short but to tha point,sorry bout wuteva happened to ya.Stay ^
-Avi

[Sand]

lol. thanks. nothing happened. just a concept i like.
depression. haha.

[AngelicSheShe]

First I liked the short piece. It was nicely done for being so short. Secound, Your sig is all messed up... you didn't even show for our topical battle lol. Third... I'm the CHAMPION!!!!! so i win! OoNnEe

[Atetrack define']

nice lil post sand,i kinda into the subject too seeing how i used to be heavily in it,trying to work it out for myself nahmean,dont think ill be gettign anywhere too soon nahmean,but still,shit was straight to the point and finsihed really nicely,the last two lines were the nicest of the lot.
nice drop sand
bismillah

[Sir Skiddz SoPhrenic]

tha wass hott man