man i loved this shit. reminded me of old BTK when OM was actually about shit. i was just running down the forum thinking all hope was lost and we should just delete it, when i came onto this. i love thw imagery, the way you intertwined the movie title into the story. Being that this is your niche of writing, i could see it as you being the one to say this shit. As in, how BTK feels. anyway i'm gonna nom it for OMHOF. best shit i've seen in OM in a long time.
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this was pretty good, only thing really i didnt like was the flow..... I loved how you started this... like the movie on repeat and you getting multiple erections.... lol.... pretty damn original.... and vocabulary was right on point.... and the horror theme... I love horror stuff so this was good for me...
they pretty much all said it but it was great...ur flow was good...great concepts...great vocab and imagery...great world play n metaphorz...just a great read...KEEP ON WRITING HOMIE!!!
yo RTF on any of my dropz...
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bruh you're sick in the head, naw but fo real dis shit's poppin, you got a good knack for imagery within the bars, the vocab is off the chain....10/10 my opinion
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you stitched the names in well the piece though similar to previous artists is still done with enough twist to make it yours not a mimic of there's i see you havent lost your edge yet stay up fam
to love something,is to die for it ,if you do, your a martyr , but these days music is morbid, false carters ..prohet's for prophet no lie, look how our last martyr was crucified. to put it in it symplicity, you aint true...you wouldnt sacrifice a few dollars for authenticity..
Sick fucking sick!!!
All my favorite movies i loved it. Kept me entertained from start to finish. Seemed to lose the plot about half way going on about rats was bit unrelated and sorta gave up on having good multi's. But by the end it all came together nicely. Great imagery this whole peice made me want to go out to a bar and tell the bar maid "your a fucking ugly bitch i want stab you to death and play around in your blood"!!!
Fucking best shit i have seen on here yet. Genious way of breathing new life into an old topic.
ahhh... now heres some word craft by a guy with 7 medals... so this is the kind of verse that wins awards.. the kind of shit people tell me i should emulate... my honest opinion... its aiight... i felt it was a little juvenile and banal for a cat of your stature though.. no hate , just sayin it straight
you rap like ibeastout votes
yeah i dont write like that but w/e...imma keep doing my thang...n so shud evryone else...like they told me...U DONT NEED MEDALS TO GET RESPECT!!!...so...i continue to write but im not aimin for an HOF no more...
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