Boom freestyle

[verde622]

Ayyo, mad buzz last night compared to today
Shit I was just fucking around but I scared em all away
So bring em out bring em out, like TI, I mean Jay
Chorus? Find a hot line to sample and replay
Example: Them, plus Kanye, and Lil Wayne
They hopped a flight on MIA's Paper Planes
And they won grammy, without mentioning her name
Sidebar: Did y'all see how pregnant she was on stage?
Gotdamn, and this is so off the top the air is thin
What y'all rappers dropped was embarrassing
There's no comparing them, find a pair stare in them
Cause y'all make it seem like being mentally impaired is in
No repairing them, fucking scared for life
and I mean in the literally sense like you're scared for life
Cause you came with iron knuckles and I came with sharp knifes
Took some of your life, then gave some of mine to your wife

And that's that you crack rats. 16 bars like it ain't nothing.

[Baron Mynd]

You had a cool swag in this one, feeling these lines most:

This is so off the top the air is thin,

And:

Cause y'all make it seem like being mentally impaired is in

Those were cool. Nice verse fam. Record this if you get the oppourtunity...

[verde622]

thanks for the feedback

[Baron Mynd]

Hey, return the feed on my "Elephants..." joint when you get a second.

[Emajanashun]

sorry i thought this was weak just a bunch of babbling

the last 2 lines were pretty good tho

but most the start was just like....whaaaa????