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    The Prayer Epic (Episode 1)

    "President Joe once had a dream
    The world held his hand, gave their pledge
    So he told them his scheme for a Saviour Machine"


    Well it stopped the wars with logic, cured the food of toxics,
    and everybody that watched it, thank the president for he's the one caused it
    then he had an idea to keeping the dying from their lossage, so they took the Prayer deep past foliage
    of the Scottish, to her cottage, where she laid cancerous, vile, when he was done she pranced with a smile
    the saviour, the Prayer, who goes through the labor and cares
    they call him a god with no mind, stalled in the line, upon, the pawns, who were gone at dawn
    from the homes, alone, with the suits, flat glutes, and now those that shoot, want to get to the root
    the crux, of why their bank account is running low on bucks, backdoor rooms, is like a laden fact for tombs
    and you'll commit suicide, due to lies, but who's to right, when the person in charge is supposed to do the light
    but this what happens when the dark, sparks, terrorist organizations are giving countries kus
    the Prayer has changed everything you win you lose
    you can be brought back from the dead, with all of that power it's no wonder he fled,
    but it's what the Prez, should have said, when the Prayer called to kill, everyone was appalled and stilled
    but the paperwork was signed and President Joe dated, so a whole town was utterly eradicated
    and then he ran in the bomb, knowing he couldn't be harmed, the world hasn't seen him since, times just had to be intense
    nuclear missiles were shot unanimously, the plans of to see, were all dammed and banned to the sea
    5 world leaders died, and it was heard that one put up a fight, and the camera observations, offer information
    a gray man with body blue streaks, the prayer had changed everything except his teeth
    but even blurred reception, couldn't hide he learned deception
    President Joe was about to use the same mechanics, try to use the same antics
    as the prayer smashed his skull into floor, he thought that he may cause a war,
    he may cause a plague, and make the world to beg
    he killed those that now live forever, but the normalcy was never back together
    and no diplomacy could hold back his weather, it rained when the shit hit the fan, and everybody tried to kill the Prayer,
    everyone looked for a lair, but it's the Prayer, he wouldn't have a hidden door with access to stairs
    but the Prayer keeps surveillance upon me and you, he catches conversation's tail end and knows what to do
    kill one save a million, don't let man do it they'll take down tall buildings
    some propaganda papers ask friend or foe, but as far as the answer it's the end to know
    everybody wants to know now, but in your dying breaths he might show how, he's on to no call
    and knows how the dominoes fall, it's still unclear whether the Prayer is our hero or wants to kill us all.
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    Re: The Prayer Epic (Episode 1)

    the much shorter Episode 2 (in the Mad Men collab, Mad Men:The Superheroes) will be here tomorrow...

    and the finale (or not) of Episode 3 will be here on Sunday or Monday

    Edit: Episode 4 (the actual finale) will be released early February.
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    Re: The Prayer Epic (Episode 1)

    nice a little long but nice i liked the opener good usage of multi's which made it flow pretty well..................just shorten it a little but overall decent
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    Re: The Prayer Epic (Episode 1)

    i definitely like the topic, i got lost in some of the points, but maybe thats just because it was long. you transition nicely from rhyme to rhyme.

    would be an interesting audio.

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