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  1. January 17th, 2009, 04:37 PM #1
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    Hit n Run renegade:

    Hit n Run renegade:
    The number 1 nominated, for being underated,
    should of won a grammy and soul train for being the greatest.
    In my thank you speech, show appreciation to bleep bleep ummm
    How about you and you For being almost as good as me.
    So I could give a fuck, about your penny for thoughts
    when my dimes make bucks. And I make a living off
    of pulling more cards then tunk.Lumps get left,
    when we battle you aint ready Playboy…not even hugh heff.
    Can Test the best I’ll rip you in less than 16 bars,
    Diss your click for hiding behind a busta like spliff star.
    You not in my league like jah and allah,
    Im Not to be fucked with…
    retire you pussies like menopause.
    weather your men or gods,
    I’ll spend my whole career getting even and beating the odds.
    Hit n Run…we some ballers,
    murdering rhymes no white collar, hip hop.
    Copy write the logo before HNR block
    so we can tax your dollars.
    And we don’t need to floss, those who want it take a loss,
    Fake gangsters yawl barrow more from scarface then rick ross.
    Noncentz been doing this “f4r” years like a presidential term.
    Till I see my favorite presidents in hell..
    in other words have Money to burn.
    Hit N Run We hot now these kids cant dispute,
    When you couldn’t eat us if you spelled are names in alphabet soup.
    If this my intro, im using it to give you a bad wrap like ford and pinto.
    And I got to be me and you got to envy me lyrically,
    Feel fear when I diss your ICONS like FAZE T.
    Noncentz was n asshole so I took down a notch for the crowd
    Lack of Logic now,
    its L.O.L cause these emcees make me laugh out loud.
    the raw shit my spits metaphors an similies,release silliqouise,
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  2. January 17th, 2009, 04:41 PM #2
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

    Why do all of your drops have hit n run in the title? Hmm well any ways this was decent no my sort of read but I'll go into it a little bit. i'm not sure who you were dissin in this or if it was just so posed to be a self glory piece but the concepts were weak. I wasn't really feeling all the fiction that you were writing about here. keep writing man
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  3. January 17th, 2009, 04:46 PM #3
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

    this isnt self bragging or even topicl its just a battle thing not directed at anyone some good ol fashion punches and dissess
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  4. January 17th, 2009, 04:54 PM #4
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

    The thing is all of these are played out man. The concepts were weak and had no point!

    retire you pussies like menopause.

    menopause doesnt retire the pussy just the menstration and the ability to have children. do some research man fuck
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  5. January 17th, 2009, 04:56 PM #5
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

    really played out????? have you sen these lines used before i mean i dont think you hating but if battling isnt your thing thats cool but if it is i assure you thes werent used before
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  6. January 18th, 2009, 12:24 PM #6
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

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  7. January 18th, 2009, 04:08 PM #7
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

    pretty good man. I love the ending and that alphebet soup line was dope. Way to keep repping the name too!
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

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  9. January 20th, 2009, 12:11 AM #9
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

    this shit was ok, the punches were present but it was lacking in rhymescheme and multies, couple good lines made it worth the read though.

    "Can Test the best I’ll rip you in less than 16 bars,
    Diss your click for hiding behind a busta like spliff star."

    ^haha that shit was nice.

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  10. January 20th, 2009, 02:06 AM #10
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

    ehh, this was ..

    i'll just say you could probably do better..
    flow was off, not much subject matter.

    keep at it tho
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    Re: Hit n Run renegade:

    Can Test the best I’ll rip you in less than 16 bars,
    Diss your click for hiding behind a busta like spliff star.
    You not in my league like jah and allah,
    Im Not to be fucked with…
    retire you pussies like menopause.
    weather your men or gods,
    I’ll spend my whole career getting even and beating the odds.
    Hit n Run…we some ballers,
    murdering rhymes no white collar, hip hop.
    Copy write the logo before HNR block
    so we can tax your dollars.
    And we don’t need to floss, those who want it take a loss,
    Fake gangsters yawl barrow more from scarface then rick ross
    ^^
    this part was real nice

    And I got to be me and you got to envy me lyrically,
    Feel fear when I diss your ICONS like FAZE T.
    Noncentz was n asshole so I took down a notch for the crowd
    Lack of Logic now,
    its L.O.L cause these emcees make me laugh out loud.
    the raw shit my spits metaphors an similies,release silliqouise,
    in freestyles the last longer then the lord of the ring triliogies
    ^^
    real nice closer

    overall cool shit
    I bet it would sound better audio
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