No Title...(WIP)

[BEAZY813]

...2 VERSES FOR A PROJECT IM STILL WORKIN ON...

VERSE 1-
PARANOIA SETS IN...BUT I STAY INHALIN//
MIX IT WIT SUM GIN, GO OFF THA DEEP END//
WELL DEPENDS...THERE MIGHT BE SUM 'X' INVOLVED//
THEN 'Y' 'Z', ILL STAY UP UNTIL THE WEEK IS GONE//
THEN GET MY WEEKEND ON, SHE GETS HER FREAKIN ON//
YES...ITS SEX IN THE CITY WIT NO TV ON//
SIN CITY...I FEEL LIKE MR COPPERFIELD//
SWAGGA HYPNOTIZED HER THEN I COPPED A FEEL//
HA!...SHE SAID 'ITS AS LONG AS THE EIFFEL!'//
I KNOW ITS AN EYEFUL, LETHAL LIKE A RIFLE//
SHOOT U UP WIT SUMTHIN U DONT WANT UNTIL 'I DOS'//
AND I DONT...SO...UMMM...EXCUSE//
ME AS IM RUNNING TO THA FOUNTAIN OF YOUTH//
FILL UP MY SYRINGE, NO VEST BUT IMMA SHOOT//
STRAIGHT TO THE VEINS AND PULSES THRU UR SYSTEM//
TURNIN BLUE FROM THA RYTHM OF MUSIC THATS IN EM//
NOW GET EM!

VERSE 2-
BULLSEYE ON THE MARK, IN THE DARK, NO DARTS//
KILL EM WIT KINDNESS? HOW THAT AINT SMART//
GOT TOOLS FOR THAT...NO RULES FOR THAT//
'BIG BIRDS' COMIN OUT...I SEE PUSSYCAT//
I SEE WHERE YOU AT IM 'PUMPED' LIKE A REEBOK//
SMOKIN ON THIS CHEEBAH, IM A SLAVE TO THIS BE-BOP//
SO I ROCKED, THEN I FLOPPED, BUT AINT STOP, I GOT//
RIGHT BACK ON MY OWN...MIDDLE FINGER, SUCK MY COCK!//
IN MY OWN WORLD, CUZ HERE THERES TOO MANY STARS//
GOTTA BE GODS 'SUN'...ALL RESPECT TO NAS//
BUT IT IS WHAT IT IS AND IT DO WHAT IT DO//
YUP! LIVIN ON THE EDGE AND SHED MY PARACHUTE//
GREW MY OWN WINGS...BEEN HIGH SINCE MY TEENS//
NEVA COMIN DOWN GRAVITY AINT HAVIN ME...//
HAPPILY EVA AFTER...COULDNT COME FASTER//
BUT THERE IS NO END...I KEEP WRITIN CHAPTERS//

LEMME KNOW WHATS GOOD? ILL RTF

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ie-386046.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...up-386523.html

[BEAZY813]

any thoughts out there? ill rtf

[Messiah Kaeto]

I thought the flow in the 2nd verse was more on point than in the firs verse man, .. Is this intended for audio? Do you have links to your work? Would be interested to hearing your delivery.

Also, I think you'll get more replies if you lose the caps lock dude.

Peace & God Bless.

[BEAZY813]

thanks for the look messiah, no audio yet but ill change the caps in tha future. PEACE!

[Messiah Kaeto]

no probs man, .. think that would work well audio-fied, more than text. pick up the equip fairly cheap man