I kinda suck

[Kyle225]

But here you go anyway, came up with it in like 3 minutes so give me a break.



Keep a sweet in my mouth and another in mah safe
bout to blow em back to back
take 2 hits and feel my strap
put it up in ya face if you try to step up
rymes flowin mad out my brain
don't even think you can try to battle me main
i split your rhymes open like a watermelon
special dilevery for mr. kissmyassion
anyway I don't know how good I can really rap
but I know if you try to step up you'll get Bapt'd
think i'm done yet? i'm just gettin started
write four ryhmes in one cipher
take a hit off mah piper
pull off a nug and load another
take a hit and be blazed
sit back and be pleased
no need to fight
shits just like flaming, only light
So sit back and take a hit
chill with mah buddies and sit
just like chris hanson from dateline nbc
why don't you have a seat over there?

[Microphone fiend]

ive read worst lines..needs improvement but your somewhat on the right track No hate tho

[Fatal.]

ehh i've seen worse drops. first off you should rap about a topic, freestyles don't really grasp people's attention in open mic. so try to think of a topic and rap about it, it also helps you focus on what to write when you stay with a topic and not wander off and rap about random stuff. your flow was mehh. your rhyme scheme was weak man. some lines didnt even rhyme. overall just keep elevating. try to think over what to write and try to avoid 3 minute freestyles, take your time there is no rush.

[ELEETE™]

Like some said...I've seen a lot worse...Open Mic has for the longest time been very topical...try an grab the readers attention immediately...build them up when writing...Freestyles are difficult to pull off because you may notice they tend to go all over the place...

[MC.cm]

just try to focus on your rhymescheme and structure. make sure it flows smoothly and adding multis and metaphors using creativity will elevate your style easily... keep at it

[fazeT]

word up
like everyone said, pick a topic, then go wit it, then you'll get sum serious feed!
stay up

[Celph Taut]

you don't "kinda" suck...don't sugercoat it, you suck.