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    Keep Ya Head Up Critique my work

    Chorus: Grind 24/7 working 7 days a week
    Its a struggle in the game, all the pressure got me beat
    but dear momma don't cry keep ya head up
    ya baby boi gonna make it keep ya head up

    Grind 24/7 working 7 days a week
    Its a struggle in the game, all the pressure got me beat
    But lil momma don't cry keep ya head up
    Everythangs all good keep ya head up

    1st verse: Kolt45

    1.See in 2006, i seen a world of bad thangs
    2.and still im askin myself will my world ever change?
    3.I've had a couple friends die, so much pain in the past.
    4. man i lost some good friends in the days of tha trap.
    5. and i continue ta hustle, i continue ta fall.
    6.and ill continue in tha game, till tha day ya boy fall
    7. with my pen and my paper and my will ta surivive
    8. and imma make it in the game, for mah family in tha sky
    9. still im living day ta day, i try ta rest but its hopeless
    10. still i need ta find a job and continue on ta focus
    11.cause im livin on tha edge, yet im ready ta die
    12. man i've had a good life, but i'm done wit tha fight
    13. but lil momma stay strong and keep ya head straight
    14. and even tho ya sick and tired of what ya friends think.
    15. and im feelin what you sayin, that you fed up.
    16. but reguardless lil momma keep ya head up.

    Chorus: Grind 24/7 working 7 days a week
    Its a struggle in the game, all the pressure got me beat
    but dear momma don't cry keep ya head up
    ya baby boi gonna make it keep ya head up

    Grind 24/7 working 7 days a week
    Its a struggle in the game, all the pressure got me beat
    But lil momma don't cry keep ya head up
    Everythangs all good keep ya head up

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