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    mainstreem psh....?

    aight ..........yo
    day in day out, its the same shit, shit emcees becoming fameous,
    just different name pricks, coming with the same hits,
    on'a rotational playlist, selected as one of the fravrits,

    just rhyming about money cars or bitches,
    or publisity stunt beef, back an forth with disses,
    radio's plays it ta millions of listeners,
    an like dumb-fucks we stay in an listen,
    we should slay their mission, spittin straight wizdom,
    dis-obay the system. an change the vision,
    you get what im sayin? coz im serious, im not playin,
    coz its us who their potrayin,
    this is goin on under ya nose simple an plane,

    them type of emcees are play'd out, claiming best an shit,
    the best ta spit, an claiming thug life coz they gotta vest that fits,
    an a pistol is what they got arrested with,
    takin pictures with their platinum necklesses,
    brain washing an effectin kids, targiting the poor targiting the rich,
    but cant get real shit on the radio, who's the fucks marketing this shit?

    who the fuck is runnin them, who knows maybe its all linked an controled by the govenment
    fuck them im sick of them,
    yeah bling bling apealin
    same thing they stealin recitin rhymes with no meanin,
    shake that ass and ice your wrist
    same old shit
    whilst these real rappers rip the mic to bits!!!.......

    feeeeeeeeed mee il post links soon 1
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    ---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
    --i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
    -------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------

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    ----Im a Part Of Rap, i look at it as an Art Infact,---
    ---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
    --i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
    -------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------

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    Re: mainstreem psh....?

    Alright..this take has been approached tons of times...but each one always has it's original content. I think that you have potential and this would be aiight on audio...but as far as structure...it was really all over the place..the flow was consistant for the most part..but it was just to predictable..i think you could've dug deeper into it..but you kept it str8 to the point..which wasn't bad..but it would've been better with a lil more thought..but all in all..it was a straght drop..keep writing..

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    Re: mainstreem psh....?

    im feelin you homes... i like the topic, i think the same shit about most rappers... i dont remeber the last real mc...... everyone is just rappers now, stuck in this tv life that every one sees. I particularly like the fact that you mentioned the shit about every body talking about ice that shit is really out dated... any way good verse, and i agree with the above statement it probably would sound good on audio.. stay up..
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    Re: mainstreem psh....?

    thanx fa the feed ....apreciate it ,,,1
    ----Im a Part Of Rap, i look at it as an Art Infact,---
    ---verses paint pictures that cause Heart Attacks,--
    --i can train a rookie ta be iller than you in 3 day's---
    -------even if he has ta Start From Stratch---------

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