alone in a corner
i peer through a window
shiny glass pane
hey baby i see you
take off your clothes
while i shank my wank
dont call the cops
or my mind will go blank
im homeless you know
i never get off
so please please show
your tits and some more
i sniffed a can of paint
before i found this new sight
your titties are huge
itlll be a good night
was this song about a hooker cuse if it was whats with the sniffin???
hmmmmmm, I guess......do your thing.
Stay Up
its about a homeless man peeping tom
yo stop posten these rideculous so called poems ur maken the section look bad u had some good poems but this is just retarded id say if ur writen bout a homeless peepin tom u might have some issues bt w/e holla bak 1
I aint mad at all i am jus bothered
I'll get honest for real, i aint been the best father
Like...Toys R Us, Chuckie Cheese...
You know a lil boy grow up wit these needs
New Years and Christmas, even the birthday
At least bring the nigga to his school on his first day
I cant believe it, this is the same way i was treated
So maybe its history repeated
-Joe Budden
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WHATEVER.. THIS SHIT IS GOLD
shit is gold ight.......fake gold.......peeping tom .....HA made me laugh
~~ NEED I SAY MORE THE WORK IS DONE~~
thank you... gold, fake gold?.. either way its shiny
Heh, made me laught...but also has serious points to it too...
...to say this aint poetry is ignorant...it's about a homeless man who, to stay sane, gets pleasures out of sniffing anything 'stimulating' he can find, which is a paint can..
..being homeless, he aint had some in a while...so out of desperation, and possible loss of mind (even if only a bit, or only for a littlw while) peeps into a window looking for a cheap thrill...
...i dunno what state of mind he wrote it in....dunno if he was taking the piss...or putting forward serius points using some sort of comedy form (satire i think..)....but it was a good piece...
...even though i felt he could've done more with it....at times seemed to be a bit too elaborate....
..respect...
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Oh.
I liked the poem it had substance in it's own little way
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