Week 11- Dilate (1 - 1) Vs yung ghost (2 - 2)

[D.Silver]

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Lines
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Match whoever drops first.

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League.

Good Luck to you both

[Nashvillain]

blah...prolly just goin 10

[Dilate.]

check

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...is-329813.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...id-329742.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ne-329743.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ip-329748.html
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...or-329747.html

[Dilate.]

Knock this kid off, ya favoured.. to see stars
ghost so weak he couldn’t weight to drop his barz
Im a lil rusty but nevertheless im a high head
N if ya wondering y ya cant sleep...
.... its coz rb don’t supply beds
The way people look right through him n its funny
How u claim to be loaded... with monopoly money
Ghost’s a wack faggot dude u just cant get by me
ya get fucked on so much ull leave people asking YG?
Don’t fuk with the best dude my verse will come with thunder bitch
Wen i lifted my knowledge i found G livin under it
Theres no comparison my verse is making this fool look weary
So ill strip ‘im of his style n make this Ghost look really scary

12. Match it..

[Nashvillain]

meh

im not losin im hungry for this win,so it looks like dilates on the menu
head back to the cypher..cuzz herb a 1-2 punch is all you got in you
all you front line herbs thinkin your dope,but yall just some weak hoes
when i pop up,hit him wit the toaster....then he'll let go of his E-go
toe 2 toe blow for blow..he will easily get knocked outta his socks
hes horrible,dude couldnt drop a tight key if he got input from the lox
in the prediction,sayin this will be a close match,sorry dude im a lier
cuzz i been thru 10 of his matches..and yet not one sparked a fire!
a disgrace,i'll break his neck and face,pumble him into the ground
ghost is far from a rich boy....but watch as i throw this D around!
wack ass punk,throw out all you got,but it dont matter you'll loose
and if gay jokes are played out,then this homos batterd and bruised

[Kris Stubbs]

wow. very weak battle.

I def. thought one of you would drop good.

Dilate-nothin real impressive in your verse. You pretty much talked and didnt show any punches, or anything direct. I thought your wordplay wasnt really all that great. overall kind of meh verse from you.

Yung-you didn't really have shit either man. Your punches were weak as well, along with personals. But you did have one,. Wordplay overall was a lil better then dilates...but in my opinion thats the only thing beter that you had.

i don't think either of you came strong.
v/yung

[Nashvillain]

links
1.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=329743
2.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=329742
3.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...up-329981.html
4.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ip-329748.html
5.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...is-329813.html

will edit more in

[Constance]

Nothing

-v-

toe 2 toe blow for blow..he will easily get knocked outta his socks
hes horrible,dude couldnt drop a tight key if he got input from the lox
im not losin im hungry for this win,so it looks like dilates on the menu
head back to the cypher..cuzz herb a 1-2 punch is all you got in you
all you front line herbs thinkin your dope,but yall just some weak hoes
when i pop up,hit him wit the toaster....then he'll let go of his E-go
^Ok and better lines...

v/yung ghost

[JDoe]

Knock this kid off, ya favoured.. to see stars
ghost so weak he couldn’t weight to drop his barz
no.
Im a lil rusty but nevertheless im a high head
N if ya wondering y ya cant sleep...
.... its coz rb don’t supply beds
nah.
The way people look right through him n its funny
How u claim to be loaded... with monopoly money
nah.
Ghost’s a wack faggot dude u just cant get by me
ya get fucked on so much ull leave people asking YG?
no.
Don’t fuk with the best dude my verse will come with thunder bitch
Wen i lifted my knowledge i found G livin under it
nah.
Theres no comparison my verse is making this fool look weary
So ill strip ‘im of his style n make this Ghost look really scary
your best...and no...

vs.

im not losin im hungry for this win,so it looks like dilates on the menu
head back to the cypher..cuzz herb a 1-2 punch is all you got in you
nah.
all you front line herbs thinkin your dope,but yall just some weak hoes
when i pop up,hit him wit the toaster....then he'll let go of his E-go
no. not witty...or creative...
toe 2 toe blow for blow..he will easily get knocked outta his socks
hes horrible,dude couldnt drop a tight key if he got input from the lox
ok.
in the prediction,sayin this will be a close match,sorry dude im a lier
cuzz i been thru 10 of his matches..and yet not one sparked a fire!
nah...not hitting...
a disgrace,i'll break his neck and face,pumble him into the ground
ghost is far from a rich boy....but watch as i throw this D around!
nah...didnt like the concept.
wack ass punk,throw out all you got,but it dont matter you'll loose
and if gay jokes are played out,then this homos batterd and bruised
ok.

*This was one-sided, but ghost at least attempted punches oppossed to Dilate...yo you gotta change ya style up homie, cuz things arent workin out...I can tell Y.G. didnt try too much, and he still beat you...you have to come harder with more creative things...dont matter if dudes' dont get chu, they shouldnt be votin...so start comin at throats...ya dig?

V/Yung Ghost.

[Dilate.]

edit: give it another week.

[Resistance]

toe 2 toe blow for blow..he will easily get knocked outta his socks
hes horrible,dude couldnt drop a tight key if he got input from the lox
Ok.

Vs.

Not Much..


Yung Ghost was half assing, didn't need much to beat Dilate, but yung ghost is slacking, and will be an enemy to others, because he might half ass, because he's getting in the habbit of it..So don't half ass ghost..

V/yung ghost.

[Tebo]

Knock this kid off, ya favoured.. to see stars
ghost so weak he couldn’t weight to drop his barz
decent
Im a lil rusty but nevertheless im a high head
N if ya wondering y ya cant sleep...
.... its coz rb don’t supply beds
mehish
The way people look right through him n its funny
How u claim to be loaded... with monopoly money
mehish
Ghost’s a wack faggot dude u just cant get by me
ya get fucked on so much ull leave people asking YG?
lol ok
Don’t fuk with the best dude my verse will come with thunder bitch
Wen i lifted my knowledge i found G livin under it
nah
Theres no comparison my verse is making this fool look weary
So ill strip ‘im of his style n make this Ghost look really scary
[b]mehish[b]

You got good wording, work on concepts a bit more, not a bad verse......

vsssss

im not losin im hungry for this win,so it looks like dilates on the menu
head back to the cypher..cuzz herb a 1-2 punch is all you got in you
aight
all you front line herbs thinkin your dope,but yall just some weak hoes
when i pop up,hit him wit the toaster....then he'll let go of his E-go
heh aight
toe 2 toe blow for blow..he will easily get knocked outta his socks
hes horrible,dude couldnt drop a tight key if he got input from the lox
decent
in the prediction,sayin this will be a close match,sorry dude im a lier
cuzz i been thru 10 of his matches..and yet not one sparked a fire!
nah
a disgrace,i'll break his neck and face,pumble him into the ground
ghost is far from a rich boy....but watch as i throw this D around!
mehish
wack ass punk,throw out all you got,but it dont matter you'll loose
and if gay jokes are played out,then this homos batterd and bruised
nice

Young Ghost came with more consistancy & better concepts with wittier lines I think. Not bad.

V// Young Ghost

[Nashvillain]

5-0

[Nashvillain]

uppin 4 some votes

[Nashvillain]

most you homos didnt even vote...uppin for some votes