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lets pull itOriginally Posted by Mid-Life
Big Drew, do you really wann eat the fists dude?//
I aint even pissed n I'd still rock 6 of you//
Pistol whip, flip shit, and ship you//
In some bubble rap, got chu feelin like a kid dude//
I'm that Young Boi, its like a mid-life crisis//
Dude wanna start beef...but he won't fight me//
Snatch ya necklace, right off ya neck, then light it//
See if its fake, get in ya face..next night it//
Might be a homicide, I might be a killa//
Cappa-cheen-no, have you actin like vanilla//
C'mon suga, add sweetness to the cup//
On second thought, my only weakness, is a slug//
But chu won't hit me, I waaaay to quick fo you quittaz//
Float away with a gold boat, down a money river//
But I'll put the Jewls to ya dome, catch a cold feva//
I'm too fucked for this shyt right now....... someone holla
My spittin is vicious, like aids im spittin true sickness
Wit a flow dats contageous spreadin rediculous
I'll lyrically murder ur ass son so get serious
Dem Pills u poppin got u must got yafeelin delerious
Da Virus dat I spit must got ya losin touch on reality kid
Because for u this battle is a phsycadellic loss trick
U goin crazy ramblin shit like u on a bad acid trip
I b pumpin ur weakness straight outa da pump
U talkin much shit son get hit da slug so what
Lyrically murderin yo ass has been lots of fun!
Vote em up Nice Rippin Mayne!
Big Drew, do you really wann eat the fists dude?//
I aint even pissed n I'd still rock 6 of you//
^^NAH
Pistol whip, flip shit, and ship you//
In some bubble rap, got chu feelin like a kid dude//
^^NAH
I'm that Young Boi, its like a mid-life crisis//
Dude wanna start beef...but he won't fight me//
^^NO RHYMES SO NAH
Snatch ya necklace, right off ya neck, then light it//
See if its fake, get in ya face..next night it//
^^NAH
Might be a homicide, I might be a killa//
Cappa-cheen-no, have you actin like vanilla//
^^NAH
C'mon suga, add sweetness to the cup//
On second thought, my only weakness, is a slug//
^^WTF......NAH
But chu won't hit me, I waaaay to quick fo you quittaz//
Float away with a gold boat, down a money river//
But I'll put the Jewls to ya dome, catch a cold feva//
^^HAHAHA NO
vs.
My spittin is vicious, like aids im spittin true sickness
Wit a flow dats contageous spreadin rediculous
^^NAH........SELF HYPE
I'll lyrically murder ur ass son so get serious
Dem Pills u poppin got u must got yafeelin delerious
^^NAH
Da Virus dat I spit must got ya losin touch on reality kid
Because for u this battle is a phsycadellic loss trick
U goin crazy ramblin shit like u on a bad acid trip
^^WTF NO
I b pumpin ur weakness straight outa da pump
U talkin much shit son get hit da slug so what
Lyrically murderin yo ass has been lots of fun!
^^NAH
V/MID-LIFE FOR BETTER ATTEMPTED PUNCHES BUT THIS BATTLE WAS WEAK........GO TO THE LLL AND SEE SOME PUNCHES..........BUT NO HATE
Big Drew, do you really wann eat the fists dude?//
I aint even pissed n I'd still rock 6 of you//
mmmmm no
Pistol whip, flip shit, and ship you//
In some bubble rap, got chu feelin like a kid dude//
This doesnt even make sense
I'm that Young Boi, its like a mid-life crisis//
Dude wanna start beef...but he won't fight me//
This doesnt even rhyme....
Snatch ya necklace, right off ya neck, then light it//
See if its fake, get in ya face..next night it//
wtf are you saying here? you gonna jump him in RL?
Might be a homicide, I might be a killa//
Cappa-cheen-no, have you actin like vanilla//
This isnt even a diss.....
C'mon suga, add sweetness to the cup//
On second thought, my only weakness, is a slug//
Self glory isnt a punch...
But chu won't hit me, I waaaay to quick fo you quittaz//
Float away with a gold boat, down a money river//
But I'll put the Jewls to ya dome, catch a cold feva//
well, for one, this was three lines, and it wasnt even a punch for two....and downright horrible as a closer...
My spittin is vicious, like aids im spittin true sickness
Wit a flow dats contageous spreadin rediculous
Not a punch.....
I'll lyrically murder ur ass son so get serious
Dem Pills u poppin got u must got yafeelin delerious
not true, so no....
Da Virus dat I spit must got ya losin touch on reality kid
Because for u this battle is a phsycadellic loss trick
U goin crazy ramblin shit like u on a bad acid trip
eh.... not really a punch...you fit into that category more then him...
I b pumpin ur weakness straight outa da pump
U talkin much shit son get hit da slug so what
Lyrically murderin yo ass has been lots of fun!
ok here, you just slit your own throat... this wasnt even funny cuz it sucked, it just sucked
uhmmmm well....... I dunno.. This battle was pretty wack. I think you both need to go into LLL or something, and learn about what real punches look like..... My advice, is to act like your spitting to the crowd, not to your opponent... say shit that would insult your opponent as well as make the crowd (the voters) laugh. Be creative too... anyways, this battle was really wack, but someone has to win, and that would be the person who was the least wack.... and that would be.... Big Drew in my opinion....Although neither one came with real punches, Drew had some lines that could Almost pass as punches if I were drunk.... On a side note, you both need to work on structure, cuz the amount of lines you guys use to rhyme is very inconsistant, and makes it harder to read your shit. If it reads really easy, and makes the crowd laugh, then you've got a good verse. Aim for that. anyways, Vote goes too Big Drew
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Big Drew, do you really wann eat the fists dude?//
I aint even pissed n I'd still rock 6 of you//
WTF^^^^ I don't get it
Pistol whip, flip shit, and ship you//
In some bubble rap, got chu feelin like a kid dude//
^^^R U serious?
I'm that Young Boi, its like a mid-life crisis//
Dude wanna start beef...but he won't fight me//
^^^When you read it back to yourself did you really think that rhyme'd?
Snatch ya necklace, right off ya neck, then light it//
See if its fake, get in ya face..next night it//
WTF next night it? HAHA WoW real bad
Might be a homicide, I might be a killa//
Cappa-cheen-no, have you actin like vanilla//
^^^Actin like vanilla wtf are you talking about shear wackness
C'mon suga, add sweetness to the cup//
On second thought, my only weakness, is a slug//
^^^^Dude ur really bad like seriously FL is not for you!!!!
But chu won't hit me, I waaaay to quick fo you quittaz//
Float away with a gold boat, down a money river//
But I'll put the Jewls to ya dome, catch a cold feva//
well, for one, this was three lines, and it wasnt even a punch for two....and ^^^^Thats really ur closer????
My spittin is vicious, like aids im spittin true sickness
Wit a flow dats contageous spreadin rediculous
^^^^Self glory doesn't hit your opponent
I'll lyrically murder ur ass son so get serious
Dem Pills u poppin got u must got yafeelin delerious
Nope not feelin it^^^
Da Virus dat I spit must got ya losin touch on reality kid
Because for u this battle is a phsycadellic loss trick
U goin crazy ramblin shit like u on a bad acid trip
It was an attempt^^^^
I b pumpin ur weakness straight outa da pump
U talkin much shit son get hit da slug so what
Lyrically murderin yo ass has been lots of fun!
^^^^Work on closers Cuz this ain't cuttin it
Honestly both of you are horrible right now but I see ur both newbies so you can improve.......Really go take a look in LLL and study.....Work on stronger punches, personals and closers And then get back in FL.......but my vote goes to BigDrew
Big Drew, do you really wann eat the fists dude?//
I aint even pissed n I'd still rock 6 of you//
no
Pistol whip, flip shit, and ship you//
In some bubble rap, got chu feelin like a kid dude//
no
I'm that Young Boi, its like a mid-life crisis//
Dude wanna start beef...but he won't fight me//
no
Snatch ya necklace, right off ya neck, then light it//
See if its fake, get in ya face..next night it//
no
Might be a homicide, I might be a killa//
Cappa-cheen-no, have you actin like vanilla//
no
C'mon suga, add sweetness to the cup//
On second thought, my only weakness, is a slug//
no
But chu won't hit me, I waaaay to quick fo you quittaz//
Float away with a gold boat, down a money river//
But I'll put the Jewls to ya dome, catch a cold feva//
no
couldnt find one punch
vs
My spittin is vicious, like aids im spittin true sickness
Wit a flow dats contageous spreadin rediculous
no self golryfication
I'll lyrically murder ur ass son so get serious
Dem Pills u poppin got u must got yafeelin delerious
no
Da Virus dat I spit must got ya losin touch on reality kid
Because for u this battle is a phsycadellic loss trick
U goin crazy ramblin shit like u on a bad acid trip
hmmmm no
I b pumpin ur weakness straight outa da pump
U talkin much shit son get hit da slug so what
Lyrically murderin yo ass has been lots of fun!
no
winner bigdrew
even though yal both need to come up with punches
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