LLL Jr Contendership - Alphabetized (6 - 1) Vs OnKor (6 - 2)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Contendership

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Good Luck to you both

[Alphabetized]

You surprised me Kor, good verse.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post5544013
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...13#post5544613
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...52#post5546752
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...38#post5549138
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post5549161
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post5549234

[OnKor]

Good.
14 it is

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328027
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328033
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328034
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328031

[Alphabetized]

Alright, beat this.

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!

12.

[OnKor]

Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet

[Tebo]

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
nice wordplay, odd tho
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
aight
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
ok lol
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
wasn't feelin it, I dunno, doesn't seem fresh
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
this was dooope, awsome line
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
like concept, did it well

Vssss

Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era
lol aight
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
nice wordplay
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
nice
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
seen it done, played
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
nice
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
played

Ok this battle was dope, ok if this was to be a real fight this is how it would seem

Alpha: Punched him in a odd place in the face well, but didn't do much
Onk: Onkor returns it with a weak punch, but in a more delicate area
Alpha: Alph counters with a odd punch, that hits him decent in the kidney
Onk: Onk throws some nice technique punches, an knocks Alpha into the ropes
Alpha: Alpha then just does avgerage blocking, FILLING the block spots
Onk Flips a counter and punches a nice punch, but nothin that hasn't been done
Alpha: Alpha seemin down, falls for a 2 count, were losing faith...
Onk: Onk does the predictable & it was like............
Alpha: A rocky ballboa moment as Alph gives him a southpol uppercut
Onk: Onkor not out of gas, pulls out a nice counter, not as hard
Alpha: Alpha gives 1 final deck & it must of...
Onk: Pooped Onkor out as he had nothing left then...

Basically Alpha got hit bit harder then hit Onkor better atr the end more consistant. Both had good wordplay etc, was good battle.

V//Alpha

I'm goin to make a long vote for my favorite battle of the week, this will be it.
I was tired an bored though in general not this battle, to write it all.

[Alphabetized]

Cool, uppin for early votes.

Great battle onk

[B.Nesse]

ALPHA:

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
lol found this funni, decent hit
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
decent, nothin too hard here
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
liked the concept, but the wording fucked the effect
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
lol funni, s'good
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
decent personal
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
coo closer

vs

ONKOR:

Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era'
lol coo shit, liked how u didnt make it like other "played" punches
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
decent, a lil forced to me but s'ok
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
ehh, wack concept but ok usage
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
seems like a compliment at the beginnin of the 2nd line
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
aight
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
nah, played concept on him

v/Alph
okay, liked both verses here...good read and shit, i got Alpha takin' this one only because there were no played lines in his verse, Kor did a good job dont get me wrong, liked most of his verse with the exception of the closer and mag lines, so in my eyes its a close call...4 lines to 3...nice battle either way enjoyed the read

[Jonezy]

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
lol nice
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
cool
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
not bad
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
cool
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
lol nicee
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
not bad

overall a decent verse consistant..junior punch was nice, good shit

Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era
cool
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
cool liked it
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
not bad
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
nahh
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
nice
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
played

not a bad verse some nice lines..closer is mad played on him tho

overall a decent battle..both had there good points...just think alpha was more consistant

good shit
v/ alpha

[OnKor]

0-3
Yeah, nice battle man.
The junior line was dope.

[Piff Jones]

Alpha
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!

vs

OnKor
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist

Was close, but Alpha had one more quotable and that junior line was dope.

V/Alphabetized.

[The Vortex]

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
uhm?.okish i guess

I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
nope

Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
bleh

We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
idk.?

But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
was lol.but cudda been worded a bit different or something at some point


Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
okish , i guess


vs


IP: 3CFC 5526


Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era
okish

Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
nope

He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
okish

Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
bleh

Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
cool.lol

Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
blah


vote alpha.........
had a slight better nflow a slight more personal verse.
decent battle tho

[Nashvillain]

Kor, lets put your rep on the line... we know you wouldn't be missed
Cuz you can't be a star on any forum... when you dont have an asterisk!
^ok
I'mma dissect this bitch, my jobs to destroy Kor just like the rest
But now my works cut out for me... so i'm just punching ya chunks of flesh
^na
Let's talk about achievements for a second, but I ain't speakin on mine
Congratz on making contendership... to bad theres no charm the 3rd time...
^coo
We all hate ur dullness in verses, no sting at all, stupid washed up yougin
Because now Onkor's tsunami... got all the other indonesians runnin
^meh
But yo the difference between us is simple, your just a fucking dweeb
S'why i'll be moving up soon.. and in junior, still gonna be stuck in the league!
^lol,ok
Me verses Onkor? This is 1 sided, read my verse and what ya see? HIT!
Cuz ya, my verse is a sight for sore eyes... like right after YOU read it!!
^decent closer

***VS***

Your old and played, come on, I'm only droppin' to show I tear ya
Al, your shit isn't prehistoric... its more from the mesozoic era
^ok
Alpha's skills are droppin', cause on rapbattles your next to worst
And in text you adequate... 'n maybe then you'll stop gettin' merked
^coo
He comes with wack punches and wordplay, guess he's new to the craft
For a stab at the title
He'll give his best shot, that's as close as Shaq shootin' from half
^lol,good
Dawg your fuckin' wack, you got no chance, he's leavin' beaten, see?
I hope ya move up, cause then our mag will finally be a decent read
^coo
Kid I've killed yuh, get outta here...6-2, Alpha, your slain bitch
'N your punches are foggy, cause the voters say that they've mist
^ok
Yeah, your bound to death, this bitch is scared and 'bout to sweat
Cause the only time Alpha is first, is in the fuckin' greek alphabet
^good closer

GREAT battle,both came wit heat props 2 both.....it was pretty close but i felt onkor came wit harder punches,and a more consistant verse

V//onkor

[Alphabetized]

5-1.

[OnKor]

1-5
Upp