TTM - 3 Winless Amigoes- one way (0 - 3) Vs Kid Blitz (0 - 6) Vs Elaborate (0 - 4)

**D.Silver** · February 26th, 2007, 01:32 PM

LLL JR Rules

Check in - due Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting - ends Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Min. 5 Voting links are required.

Missing/No voting links
If you win the battle=no win added to your tally.
If you lose the battle=2 loses

Offender(s) will be placed in the Penalty Box, with what penalties they've incurred, next to their name.

Legislation.G
If in your battle you are not up by more then 2 votes when the battle is closed, the Deduction of votes for posting less then the min 5 links, will come into effect. Meaning if the votes deducted results in a lost for you, it will be Permanently Recorded.

Lines
Minimum 20 - Max 40
Match whoever drops first.

No Feeding, biting, recycling, bitching, or swaying

No Pics, unless agreed upon.

No Editing of your verse.

If you break any rules, you will be dealt with. Punishments will vary from each situation, so you could either get votes deducted from your battle or get booted from the League.

1 round, 1 verse each.
Wins will be handled like this.

1st = 2W
2nd = 1W - 1L
3rd = 1L

Good Luck to you all

**JDoe** · February 26th, 2007, 06:32 PM

**JDoe** · February 26th, 2007, 07:39 PM

Check it, @ Both You Bitches.

One Way.
How lewd, iam abstractin this faggots habits making them shreud
How hes a femcee's dream...to become a feminine dude
Drop ya jaw, punches crunch and dismember this punk's skull
your far from bar's b, but you get drunk and fuck blow up dolls
your a fuckin Sycophant, give advice to everybody, than get whored
...Fuckin Canadian punk, I'll Do an X an have you get it on the floor
Grow some balls and man-up, cuz ya punches are gettin weaker
but One persist to come pussy and exact revenge...of a wife beater
Ice Hockey punk, the stands the closest you've been to athletics
...other than trippin over ya teams waterbottles callin for paramedics
And you'll say 0-6, but bitch you ONLINE stands for garbage anyday
...PLAYED THREADS was useless...only cause it pointed in One Way
Dump em.Silver wont be the only One to put Way's ass in check
...And DQ HOMOS.Silver, will soon be puttin One Way's career to rest
He knows bitches hold the league down, and leave progress deceased
...and since you can't stand Mariah...dont expect to B.Nesse

16.

Elaborate

Stay Offline, since it TTM should Say "Kid Blitz Versus One Way"
...because we Elaborate on the wackness here every single day!
Dude is bitch-made, can't be sharp if he went on MTV's MADE
dude couldnt swing deadly ahead me if we switchblades
Fold up ya career dumbfuck, and give me a number five...
...and take it to the next level, with an order of curly fries
and how can you get pissed, and not handle the dead truths
...especially that your not hot fire, standing under the damn roof
And this dumb muthafucker, thanx he can attempt to prevail
...a bitch who thinks LLL will give him a ticket to Yale
Not much to inquire about an emcee, whos outward appearance s' shit
go head n' bite, fifty lines, you can't make em rhyme "Just a lil Bit"
This match is really 2 Winless Amigoes and a Hasbeen
...but you havent, the member's pics called you an uglyfucks twin
and you'll drop rudely, to oppose how i forced your ass moody
...fuck you...and your RB rendition of an "Elaborate RUDY"

16.

**D.Silver** · February 26th, 2007, 10:40 PM

No more freeposting.

**one way** · March 2nd, 2007, 09:43 PM

Fucking eleborate, 1st is for blitz.........

You aint getting no where pal, being gay is you and your habits wack
Cause you wouldn’t be on my level if you hoped on Elaborates back
I’m the ill one living to rhyme, you got a criminal mind to take charge
That means it only takes one brain cell to put you behind straight bars
Yo kid, how could you be that stupid, your word supplier’s flattened
I say fuck becoming a writer, when I’ll just throw the versifier at him
I’m dope you looser, you aint on any higher shit than farting roofers
You wouldn’t be the King Jr. if you had a dream with Martin Luther
Took your shit to front lines claiming you Jr. and acted all line tough
As soon as they saw you flaunted your stuff all the wack kids signed up
Your horrible blitz… you wouldn’t know a punch when it lands you
Your the only one around that needs a translator to understand you
You aint nothing dope, your faker than shit, I don’t understand it blitz
You go off naming yourself after a defensive play, than you record 0-6
You wouldn’t throw a punch if you were rocky, so I’ll throw a bolder
Fuck calling me a dick rider bitch, the correct term is your shoulders

You can‘t take another loss…..I’m throwing fists to this wimp joke
And if you take another punch, you’d be wacker than lymph notes
I’ll kill a brit so this kid will be half the man he used to be forever
Leaves you with only EL…..at least you’ll never forget your record
I should call myself wack as fuck, it seems to be the shit your about
Every time you drop a verse you consistently contradict yourself
I aint gunna lie to you punk, I really don’t have a clue who you be
But I was told you couldn’t get a girl in a polygamists community
Blah blah blah jiberish horse shit……………you wack as all fuck
you wouldn’t win if it was past tense and you were packing a buck
Your wack as all fuck, sorry…I got a problem repeating the past El
And you could say we’re chalky creations, because we’re all pastel
Leave your weak lines weathered, you punches feel like feathers
In order to graduate to LLL….…You have to be three times better
Oh my god, your wack…………We can tell you don’t work hard
Cause your skills are below average like your high school report card

**Tebo** · March 2nd, 2007, 10:53 PM

Stay Offline, since it TTM should Say "Kid Blitz Versus One Way"
...because we Elaborate on the wackness here every single day!
Not much to inquire about an emcee, whos outward appearance s' shit
go head n' bite, fifty lines, you can't make em rhyme "Just a lil Bit"

Vs

You aint getting no where pal, being gay is you and your habits wack
Cause you wouldn’t be on my level if you hoped on Elaborates back
I’m the ill one living to rhyme, you got a criminal mind to take charge
That means it only takes one brain cell to put you behind straight bars
Yo kid, how could you be that stupid, your word supplier’s flattened
I say fuck becoming a writer, when I’ll just throw the versifier at him
Took your shit to front lines claiming you Jr. and acted all line tough
As soon as they saw you flaunted your stuff all the wack kids signed up
You aint nothing dope, your faker than shit, I don’t understand it blitz
You go off naming yourself after a defensive play, than you record 0-6
You wouldn’t throw a punch if you were rocky, so I’ll throw a bolder
Fuck calling me a dick rider bitch, the correct term is your shoulders

I’ll kill a brit so this kid will be half the man he used to be forever
Leaves you with only EL…..at least you’ll never forget your record
Your wack as all fuck, sorry…I got a problem repeating the past El
And you could say we’re chalky creations, because we’re all pastel
Leave your weak lines weathered, you punches feel like feathers
In order to graduate to LLL….…You have to be three times better

One Way owned Blitz & even if Blitz came weak he owned Elab who no showed

1. V//One way
2. Blitz
3. elab

**JDoe** · March 2nd, 2007, 11:02 PM

okkay...uppin for experienced votes.

**one way** · March 2nd, 2007, 11:06 PM

hahaha, experienced votes.............dumb ass

**JDoe** · March 2nd, 2007, 11:34 PM

^what a fagt...

**-Coop-** · March 2nd, 2007, 11:54 PM

This is just basically a beef battle.

I'll only judge the verses for each other, and edit if Elaborate drops within the next 10 or so minutes...

And since this is long... I'll do a points system.

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Kid Blitz
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How lewd, iam abstractin this faggots habits making them shreud
How hes a femcee's dream...to become a feminine dude
0.5/2
Drop ya jaw, punches crunch and dismember this punk's skull
your far from bar's b, but you get drunk and fuck blow up dolls
0.5/2
your a fuckin Sycophant, give advice to everybody, than get whored
...Fuckin Canadian punk, I'll Do an X an have you get it on the floor
0.5/2
Grow some balls and man-up, cuz ya punches are gettin weaker
but One persist to come pussy and exact revenge...of a wife beater
1/2
Ice Hockey punk, the stands the closest you've been to athletics
...other than trippin over ya teams waterbottles callin for paramedics
1/2
And you'll say 0-6, but bitch you ONLINE stands for garbage anyday
...PLAYED THREADS was useless...only cause it pointed in One Way
1.5/2
Dump em.Silver wont be the only One to put Way's ass in check
...And DQ HOMOS.Silver, will soon be puttin One Way's career to rest
0.5/2
He knows bitches hold the league down, and leave progress deceased
...and since you can't stand Mariah...dont expect to B.Nesse
0.5/2

- 6/16 - This verse wasn't that great, although it was better than what you usually drop. You definitely could've spent more time on this verse, and worked on the wording. The played thread line was your only decent bar in my opinion, everything else needed wording. A lot of your concepts weren't that creative either. As much as you will think this is hate, it isn't, because most of the voters will agree. (Most = All)

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One Way
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You aint getting no where pal, being gay is you and your habits wack
Cause you wouldn’t be on my level if you hoped on Elaborates back
1/2
I’m the ill one living to rhyme, you got a criminal mind to take charge
That means it only takes one brain cell to put you behind straight bars
1.5/2
Yo kid, how could you be that stupid, your word supplier’s flattened
I say fuck becoming a writer, when I’ll just throw the versifier at him
0.5/2
I’m dope you looser, you aint on any higher shit than farting roofers
You wouldn’t be the King Jr. if you had a dream with Martin Luther
1/2
Took your shit to front lines claiming you Jr. and acted all line tough
As soon as they saw you flaunted your stuff all the wack kids signed up
1/2
Your horrible blitz… you wouldn’t know a punch when it lands you
Your the only one around that needs a translator to understand you
1/2
You aint nothing dope, your faker than shit, I don’t understand it blitz
You go off naming yourself after a defensive play, than you record 0-6
1/2
You wouldn’t throw a punch if you were rocky, so I’ll throw a bolder
Fuck calling me a dick rider bitch, the correct term is your shoulders
1/2

- 8/16 - Not much better, but a definite improvement from KB's verse. While he dropped consistently poor, with a few "ok's" here and there, you dropped consistently ok, with a few "decent's" here and there. Nothing in this battle was outstanding, incorrect wording / lack of hard-hitters killed both of you.

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VOTE: ONE WAY
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**kid sick'** · March 3rd, 2007, 12:19 AM

How lewd, iam abstractin this faggots habits making them shreud
How hes a femcee's dream...to become a feminine dude
meh
Drop ya jaw, punches crunch and dismember this punk's skull
your far from bar's b, but you get drunk and fuck blow up dolls
no..
your a fuckin Sycophant, give advice to everybody, than get whored
...Fuckin Canadian punk, I'll Do an X an have you get it on the floor
um..wow..I get it but wow...
Grow some balls and man-up, cuz ya punches are gettin weaker
but One persist to come pussy and exact revenge...of a wife beater
meh, ok
Ice Hockey punk, the stands the closest you've been to athletics
...other than trippin over ya teams waterbottles callin for paramedics
no...
And you'll say 0-6, but bitch you ONLINE stands for garbage anyday
...PLAYED THREADS was useless...only cause it pointed in One Way
ok..
Dump em.Silver wont be the only One to put Way's ass in check
...And DQ HOMOS.Silver, will soon be puttin One Way's career to rest
no
He knows bitches hold the league down, and leave progress deceased
...and since you can't stand Mariah...dont expect to B.Nesse
ok
Stay Offline, since it TTM should Say "Kid Blitz Versus One Way"
...because we Elaborate on the wackness here every single day!
worded horrible
Dude is bitch-made, can't be sharp if he went on MTV's MADE
dude couldnt swing deadly ahead me if we switchblades
no
Fold up ya career dumbfuck, and give me a number five...
...and take it to the next level, with an order of curly fries
meh
and how can you get pissed, and not handle the dead truths
...especially that your not hot fire, standing under the damn roof
no
And this dumb muthafucker, thanx he can attempt to prevail
...a bitch who thinks LLL will give him a ticket to Yale
wtf negro.. You weird
Not much to inquire about an emcee, whos outward appearance s' shit
go head n' bite, fifty lines, you can't make em rhyme "Just a lil Bit"
wow..just wow..
This match is really 2 Winless Amigoes and a Hasbeen
...but you havent, the member's pics called you an uglyfucks twin
no
and you'll drop rudely, to oppose how i forced your ass moody
...fuck you...and your RB rendition of an "Elaborate RUDY"
noooooooooooooo

Blitz your concpets are boring, idk what is wrong with you. Then you pull a "decent" concpet and word it horrible. Um, I don't know if you just type and don't think or what but try spending more time on your verse's..

vs

You aint getting no where pal, being gay is you and your habits wack
Cause you wouldn’t be on my level if you hoped on Elaborates back
meh
I’m the ill one living to rhyme, you got a criminal mind to take charge
That means it only takes one brain cell to put you behind straight bars
decent
Yo kid, how could you be that stupid, your word supplier’s flattened
I say fuck becoming a writer, when I’ll just throw the versifier at him
no
I’m dope you looser, you aint on any higher shit than farting roofers
You wouldn’t be the King Jr. if you had a dream with Martin Luther
worded meh, decent conept though
Took your shit to front lines claiming you Jr. and acted all line tough
As soon as they saw you flaunted your stuff all the wack kids signed up
True lmao but yea
Your horrible blitz… you wouldn’t know a punch when it lands you
Your the only one around that needs a translator to understand you
na
You aint nothing dope, your faker than shit, I don’t understand it blitz
You go off naming yourself after a defensive play, than you record 0-6
ok
You wouldn’t throw a punch if you were rocky, so I’ll throw a bolder
Fuck calling me a dick rider bitch, the correct term is your shoulders
na
You can‘t take another loss…..I’m throwing fists to this wimp joke
And if you take another punch, you’d be wacker than lymph notes
not really a punch
I’ll kill a brit so this kid will be half the man he used to be forever
Leaves you with only EL…..at least you’ll never forget your record
ok
I should call myself wack as fuck, it seems to be the shit your about
Every time you drop a verse you consistently contradict yourself
no rhyme wtf
I aint gunna lie to you punk, I really don’t have a clue who you be
But I was told you couldn’t get a girl in a polygamists community
blah
Blah blah blah jiberish horse shit……………you wack as all fuck
you wouldn’t win if it was past tense and you were packing a buck
nooo....
Your wack as all fuck, sorry…I got a problem repeating the past El
And you could say we’re chalky creations, because we’re all pastel
blah
Leave your weak lines weathered, you punches feel like feathers
In order to graduate to LLL….…You have to be three times better
true but no
Oh my god, your wack…………We can tell you don’t work hard
Cause your skills are below average like your high school report card
meh

Um... wow

v/ 1st: one way
2nd:kid blitz
3rd: the other dude

**Icarus** · March 3rd, 2007, 12:31 AM

Drop ya jaw, punches crunch and dismember this punk's skull
dope setup, had 2 point that out
Fold up ya career dumbfuck, and give me a number five...
...and take it to the next level, with an order of curly fries
nice

You aint getting no where pal, being gay is you and your habits wack
Cause you wouldn’t be on my level if you hoped on Elaborates back
LMAO
Took your shit to front lines claiming you Jr. and acted all line tough
As soon as they saw you flaunted your stuff all the wack kids signed up
terrible wording but good concept
You wouldn’t throw a punch if you were rocky, so I’ll throw a bolder
Fuck calling me a dick rider bitch, the correct term is your shoulders
again a good concept just could have been worded better

Oneway won this convincingly. I think I said it before, I dont know why he hasnt won more battles. The opener was a killer. Kid Blitz you improved a good bit too, you had some good set ups and some nice wording, just try and work on wittier punches or stuff that you think will make people laugh.

v/ One Way

**JDoe** · March 3rd, 2007, 01:20 AM

@ Kid Sick.
actually i free'd all this shit on the keyboard...didnt take the time to write it, but i will, when i feel i need to...

**one way** · March 3rd, 2007, 06:46 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328035
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328031
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328030
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328033
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328028

**one way** · March 3rd, 2007, 10:20 PM

Originally Posted by Kid Blitz

@ Kid Sick.
actually i free'd all this shit on the keyboard...didnt take the time to write it, but i will, when i feel i need to...

Why do you spit like that every drop than, think it would be about time you feel you need to............0-6

4-0

peace

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