Week 9 - -Coop- (4 - 2) Vs Jynx (1 - 0)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

Check in - due Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting - ends Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Min. 5 Voting links are required.

Missing/No voting links
If you win the battle=no win added to your tally.
If you lose the battle=2 loses

Offender(s) will be placed in the Penalty Box, with what penalties they've incurred, next to their name.

Legislation.G
If in your battle you are not up by more then 2 votes when the battle is closed, the Deduction of votes for posting less then the min 5 links, will come into effect. Meaning if the votes deducted results in a lost for you, it will be Permanently Recorded.

Lines
Minimum 10 - Max 30
Match whoever drops first.

No Feeding, biting, recycling, bitching, or swaying

No Pics, unless agreed upon.

No Editing of your verse.

If you break any rules, you will be dealt with. Punishments will vary from each situation, so you could either get votes deducted from your battle or get booted from the League.

Good Luck to you both

[Kris Stubbs]

check.

[-Coop-]

Lol.
No more than 12.
Match whoever drops.

[-Coop-]

Shouldn't have to go harder than this...


What's the point of beef? You're lucky, I'm never one to tattle
Just tryin to make up... an excuse for why you EVER won a battle
We can both remotely agree, he's been sucking dick for months
So when I put you on mutual... finally shut your mouth for once
Usually for good luck, you gotta knock on wood, a sure sound
But for a jynx this bad? You'll have to break the door down
So how you gonna 'keep rising'? You need to be ill to convince
Since you started at the bottom... and it's been downhill ever since
You're headed down the wrong path, got jinxs instead of curses
And "He's on the road to suc"cess everyone who's read his verses

10, you betta show

[-Coop-]

1 1/2 Hrs left...

-LINKS-
-1-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...5&postcount=30
-2-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...90&postcount=6
-3-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...77&postcount=9
-4-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...9&postcount=10
-5-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...7&postcount=16
-6-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&postcount=10

[Kris Stubbs]

i'm bout to crush this hor in dude...fuck 4 and 2 i'm 1 and 0
You suck nigga, you can't afford to lose..i'll just run it slow
how could i lose to this lame when i can make hits just on dudes name
I'll put u to shame dude and knock over every chicken coop ya stay in
Your raps are chicken poop and gay bitch......ya too stupid
Aignt goin nowhere cuz i took the rims off ya coop, ya coop shoeless
I'll put YOU behind the wood boy, cuz ya don't know how to use a multi
-Coop- ya so useless, and the only thing you good for is housin poultry
And its gon take a thousand multi's, to pull off this masters punch
Fear factors over kid.....and u didn't even make it to the last stunt


done.

[Kris Stubbs]

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...84#post5549884
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...07#post5550107
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...03#post5550103
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...7&page=1&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...32#post5550032

^will edit with more.

[Tebo]

What's the point of beef? You're lucky, I'm never one to tattle
Just tryin to make up... an excuse for why you EVER won a battle
nice
We can both remotely agree, he's been sucking dick for months
So when I put you on mutual... finally shut your mouth for once
nice wordplay
Usually for good luck, you gotta knock on wood, a sure sound
But for a jynx this bad? You'll have to break the door down
lol
So how you gonna 'keep rising'? You need to be ill to convince
Since you started at the bottom... and it's been downhill ever since
lol
You're headed down the wrong path, got jinxs instead of curses
And "He's on the road to suc"cess everyone who's read his verses
not bad

Weakest line was the ender, so thats pretty consistant

Vssss

i'm bout to crush this hor in dude...fuck 4 and 2 i'm 1 and 0
You suck nigga, you can't afford to lose..i'll just run it slow
meh, kinda a miss
how could i lose to this lame when i can make hits just on dudes name
I'll put u to shame dude and knock over every chicken coop ya stay in
mehish
Your raps are chicken poop and gay bitch......ya too stupid
Aignt goin nowhere cuz i took the rims off ya coop, ya coop shoeless
nah needs wording
I'll put YOU behind the wood boy, cuz ya don't know how to use a multi
-Coop- ya so useless, and the only thing you good for is housin poultry
this is ok, but repetitive to a previous line, but pretty good
And its gon take a thousand multi's, to pull off this masters punch
Fear factors over kid.....and u didn't even make it to the last stunt
good concept, bad landing

Jynx needs concept work and wording

V// Coop for overall alot better verse

[Icarus]

What's the point of beef? You're lucky, I'm never one to tattle
Just tryin to make up... an excuse for why you EVER won a battle
aite
We can both remotely agree, he's been sucking dick for months
So when I put you on mutual... finally shut your mouth for once
coo wordplay..didnt need the ellipsis tho
Usually for good luck, you gotta knock on wood, a sure sound
But for a jynx this bad? You'll have to break the door down
lol...wack as hell set up but the punch made me smile
So how you gonna 'keep rising'? You need to be ill to convince
Since you started at the bottom... and it's been downhill ever since
aite
You're headed down the wrong path, got jinxs instead of curses
And "He's on the road to suc"cess everyone who's read his verses
ehhh...its aites




i'm bout to crush this hor in dude...fuck 4 and 2 i'm 1 and 0
You suck nigga, you can't afford to lose..i'll just run it slow
???
how could i lose to this lame when i can make hits just on dudes name
I'll put u to shame dude and knock over every chicken coop ya stay in
na
Your raps are chicken poop and gay bitch......ya too stupid
Aignt goin nowhere cuz i took the rims off ya coop, ya coop shoeless
decent attempt but poorly worded...
I'll put YOU behind the wood boy, cuz ya don't know how to use a multi
-Coop- ya so useless, and the only thing you good for is housin poultry
chicken coop lines are played and you using them every other line aint helping. Ask yourself if most of his opponents probably resort to chicken coop lines as witty wordplay b4 you drop ya punches
And its gon take a thousand multi's, to pull off this masters punch
Fear factors over kid.....and u didn't even make it to the last stunt
I have no idea y u keep talkin about multis

Coop had more consistency and a tad more professionalism in his verse
V/ Coop

[-Coop-]

*Looks up ellipsis*

Oh, ok... lol

2-0 Me

[OnKor]

What's the point of beef? You're lucky, I'm never one to tattle
Just tryin to make up... an excuse for why you EVER won a battle
Pretty good
We can both remotely agree, he's been sucking dick for months
So when I put you on mutual... finally shut your mouth for once
Good wordplay
Usually for good luck, you gotta knock on wood, a sure sound
But for a jynx this bad? You'll have to break the door down
Nah
So how you gonna 'keep rising'? You need to be ill to convince
Since you started at the bottom... and it's been downhill ever since
Meh
You're headed down the wrong path, got jinxs instead of curses
And "He's on the road to suc"cess everyone who's read his verses
Kind of odd, ok


vs.


i'm bout to crush this hor in dude...fuck 4 and 2 i'm 1 and 0
You suck nigga, you can't afford to lose..i'll just run it slow
Nope
how could i lose to this lame when i can make hits just on dudes name
I'll put u to shame dude and knock over every chicken coop ya stay in
Weak
Your raps are chicken poop and gay bitch......ya too stupid
Aignt goin nowhere cuz i took the rims off ya coop, ya coop shoeless
Weak again
I'll put YOU behind the wood boy, cuz ya don't know how to use a multi
-Coop- ya so useless, and the only thing you good for is housin poultry
Nah, thats expected
And its gon take a thousand multi's, to pull off this masters punch
Fear factors over kid.....and u didn't even make it to the last stunt
Wack


Vote: Coop
He had better punches than Jynx. Jynx, you need some better concepts. And Coop you didn't drop that well, but you knew you didn't need to. Coop also won with more consistency

[JayUNZ]

coop
What's the point of beef? You're lucky, I'm never one to tattle
Just tryin to make up... an excuse for why you EVER won a battle
^^^^ok
We can both remotely agree, he's been sucking dick for months
So when I put you on mutual... finally shut your mouth for once
^^meh
Usually for good luck, you gotta knock on wood, a sure sound
But for a jynx this bad? You'll have to break the door down
^^^ok
So how you gonna 'keep rising'? You need to be ill to convince
Since you started at the bottom... and it's been downhill ever since
^^^nah
You're headed down the wrong path, got jinxs instead of curses
And "He's on the road to suc"cess everyone who's read his verses
^^^lol dope closer

jynx
i'm bout to crush this hor in dude...fuck 4 and 2 i'm 1 and 0
You suck nigga, you can't afford to lose..i'll just run it slow
^^^lol wat lol
how could i lose to this lame when i can make hits just on dudes name
I'll put u to shame dude and knock over every chicken coop ya stay in
^^^chicken coop punches against him r played...and this shit didnt ryhme
Your raps are chicken poop and gay bitch......ya too stupid
Aignt goin nowhere cuz i took the rims off ya coop, ya coop shoeless
^^^lol r u serius son??
I'll put YOU behind the wood boy, cuz ya don't know how to use a multi
-Coop- ya so useless, and the only thing you good for is housin poultry
^^^no
And its gon take a thousand multi's, to pull off this masters punch
Fear factors over kid.....and u didn't even make it to the last stunt
^^^multis dont win battles...weak

v/coop...jynx step ya rap game up homie

[Taz™]

Coop.

What's the point of beef? You're lucky, I'm never one to tattle
Just tryin to make up... an excuse for why you EVER won a battle
^nice.

We can both remotely agree, he's been sucking dick for months
So when I put you on mutual... finally shut your mouth for once
^again Nice.

- Those 2 i quoted was clearly enough to take down Jynx.

vS.

Jynx

Your raps are chicken poop and gay bitch......ya too stupid
Aignt goin nowhere cuz i took the rims off ya coop, ya coop shoeless
^this had most potential.

focus.
you'r concepts are all over the stage.
and brush up w/ the wordings

VOTE: Coop. w/ a stronger verse.

[Viktor Fallon]

What's the point of beef? You're lucky, I'm never one to tattle
Just tryin to make up... an excuse for why you EVER won a battle
^^^okay opener nuthin special
We can both remotely agree, he's been sucking dick for months
So when I put you on mutual... finally shut your mouth for once
^^^decent
Usually for good luck, you gotta knock on wood, a sure sound
But for a jynx this bad? You'll have to break the door down
^^^lol good i liked this one
So how you gonna 'keep rising'? You need to be ill to convince
Since you started at the bottom... and it's been downhill ever since
^^^okay but played
You're headed down the wrong path, got jinxs instead of curses
And "He's on the road to suc"cess everyone who's read his verses
^^^nah at this closer



vs



i'm bout to crush this hor in dude...fuck 4 and 2 i'm 1 and 0
You suck nigga, you can't afford to lose..i'll just run it slow
^^^no at this opener
how could i lose to this lame when i can make hits just on dudes name
I'll put u to shame dude and knock over every chicken coop ya stay in
^^^no
Your raps are chicken poop and gay bitch......ya too stupid
Aignt goin nowhere cuz i took the rims off ya coop, ya coop shoeless
^^^coulda been good if you worded it right but no it was weak
I'll put YOU behind the wood boy, cuz ya don't know how to use a multi
-Coop- ya so useless, and the only thing you good for is housin poultry
^^^good this is the only name play that hit you used
And its gon take a thousand multi's, to pull off this masters punch
Fear factors over kid.....and u didn't even make it to the last stunt
^^^weak closer


V/coop... he took this battle with more lines that hit an better concepts his verse was overall less played..jynx you had that one house poultry line but the rest was weak not worded right...the coop shoe line coulda been dope..but decent battle ya'll

[one way]

What's the point of beef? You're lucky, I'm never one to tattle
Just tryin to make up... an excuse for why you EVER won a battle
na
We can both remotely agree, he's been sucking dick for months
So when I put you on mutual... finally shut your mouth for once
don't get what mutual has to do with shuting your mouth
Usually for good luck, you gotta knock on wood, a sure sound
But for a jynx this bad? You'll have to break the door down
hmmm, ok I guess
So how you gonna 'keep rising'? You need to be ill to convince
Since you started at the bottom... and it's been downhill ever since
haha, decent
You're headed down the wrong path, got jinxs instead of curses
And "He's on the road to suc"cess everyone who's read his verses
nice





i'm bout to crush this hor in dude...fuck 4 and 2 i'm 1 and 0
You suck nigga, you can't afford to lose..i'll just run it slow
weak, not even a punchline
how could i lose to this lame when i can make hits just on dudes name
I'll put u to shame dude and knock over every chicken coop ya stay in
weak and prolly played, chicken coop is the first shit i would think of when I herre the name coop
Your raps are chicken poop and gay bitch......ya too stupid
Aignt goin nowhere cuz i took the rims off ya coop, ya coop shoeless
you said coop too much, and rhymed chicken coop with chicken poop....?
I'll put YOU behind the wood boy, cuz ya don't know how to use a multi
-Coop- ya so useless, and the only thing you good for is housin poultry
your on the same concept, still weak
And its gon take a thousand multi's, to pull off this masters punch
Fear factors over kid.....and u didn't even make it to the last stunt
weak


vote coop