Week 9 - *Blaze* (4 - 3) Vs yung ghost (1 - 1)

[D.Silver]

LLL JR Rules

Check in - due Wednesday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Verses - due Friday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Voting - ends Sunday, 11:59 PM Eastern Time.
Min. 5 Voting links are required.

Missing/No voting links
If you win the battle=no win added to your tally.
If you lose the battle=2 loses

Offender(s) will be placed in the Penalty Box, with what penalties they've incurred, next to their name.

Legislation.G
If in your battle you are not up by more then 2 votes when the battle is closed, the Deduction of votes for posting less then the min 5 links, will come into effect. Meaning if the votes deducted results in a lost for you, it will be Permanently Recorded.

Lines
Minimum 10 - Max 30
Match whoever drops first.

No Feeding, biting, recycling, bitching, or swaying

No Pics, unless agreed upon.

No Editing of your verse.

If you break any rules, you will be dealt with. Punishments will vary from each situation, so you could either get votes deducted from your battle or get booted from the League.

Good Luck to you both

[Viktor Fallon]

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[Nashvillain]

g/l...ima prolly go 12

[Nashvillain]

im always on my grind....gettin more bitches and more bread
while your verses got more rough spots then penlords fore head
this cat constantly drops below the bar,some1 give him a lift
IRAQ'ed up your losses and it took SADAM long
................the war in the middle east was over with
i heard high school is easy these days...man thats some bull
and ya girls a slut........i heard all the male students are honerole(on-her-hole)
JR does got some wack heads...but narc,your the worst
*BLAZE*,LMAO.....i barely seen a spark in your verse
ghosts the under dog - thats just the way yall see that
well i might be the ^,guess that explains why i ate this cat

[Viktor Fallon]

you suck

he ain't big enough to get picked up by a set
you only a yung ghost, cause you ain't fully developed yet
we can battle at my house,....the studio hall
i'll hit ghost with sucha punchline..he'll get caught in the wall
ghost is wack, he aint coming for the throne
Claiming rock hard,
.......But to me he just a stepping stone
Kinda like ya dick son....it never been laid
When i say honeys are "on the Gho"..I mean their walking away
when i snuff you out, you gonna leak ya blood
the combo i'll throw at ya grill...ya bound to get a kick outta

[Tebo]

Blaze came alot more fresh. better wording and harder punches

It thought Blaze did pretty good. young is elevateing.

V//Blaze

[Donald Trump]

im always on my grind....gettin more bitches and more bread
while your verses got more rough spots then penlords fore head
weak
this cat constantly drops below the bar,some1 give him a lift
IRAQ'ed up your losses and it took SADAM long
................the war in the middle east was over with
nah weak wordplay
i heard high school is easy these days...man thats some bull
and ya girls a slut........i heard all the male students are honerole(on-her-hole)
forced wordplay
JR does got some wack heads...but narc,your the worst
*BLAZE*,LMAO.....i barely seen a spark in your verse
okey
ghosts the under dog - thats just the way yall see that
well i might be the ^,guess that explains why i ate this cat
meh ok

vs

he ain't big enough to get picked up by a set
you only a yung ghost, cause you ain't fully developed yet
meh okey
we can battle at my house,....the studio hall
i'll hit ghost with sucha punchline..he'll get caught in the wall
nah weak
ghost is wack, he aint coming for the throne
Claiming rock hard,
.......But to me he just a stepping stone
played punch
Kinda like ya dick son....it never been laid
When i say honeys are "on the Gho"..I mean their walking away
lol cool
when i snuff you out, you gonna leak ya blood
the combo i'll throw at ya grill...ya bound to get a kick outta
weak

v-Blaze harder punches

[Kris Stubbs]

this battle was good. I liked it.
Both came fresh and tried hard at it.
Yung, definately doin better here, your
punches were strong..but u didn't come
through on all your lines.
Blaze-good verse. good flow throughout
all of it. strong wordplay. good concepts
only 2 bad lines..


v/blaze

[Brasilz Finezt]

ghost is wack, he aint coming for the throne
Claiming rock hard,
.......But to me he just a stepping stone
Kinda like ya dick son....it never been laid
When i say honeys are "on the Gho"..I mean their walking away

vs.

nothing
.
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yung ghost is comin along strong a bit the more he battles...here, his wordplay attempt is strong, but yet weak in sum areas cuz of the concepts he use are played and a bit forced...flow was good, potential usage of concepts were ok, but u still got more elevatin 2 do...blaze has sum elevatin 2 do as well, but this battle goes 2 him i'd say...he had sum good punches, a bit shaky but had him more on edge in this battle...
v/ Blaze

[Nashvillain]

Blaze came alot more fresh. better wording and harder punches

It thought Blaze did pretty good. young is elevateing.

V//Blaze

not trying 2 bitch but can nobody else vot like this fool,at least break down the bars,lmao

0-4

good battle blaze

[JDoe]

im always on my grind....gettin more bitches and more bread
while your verses got more rough spots then penlords fore head
lol.
this cat constantly drops below the bar,some1 give him a lift
IRAQ'ed up your losses and it took SADAM long
................the war in the middle east was over with
ok.
i heard high school is easy these days...man thats some bull
and ya girls a slut........i heard all the male students are honerole(on-her-hole)
meh k
JR does got some wack heads...but narc,your the worst
*BLAZE*,LMAO.....i barely seen a spark in your verse
nah.
ghosts the under dog - thats just the way yall see that
well i might be the ^,guess that explains why i ate this cat
ok finisher.

vs.

he ain't big enough to get picked up by a set
you only a yung ghost, cause you ain't fully developed yet
ok.
we can battle at my house,....the studio hall
i'll hit ghost with sucha punchline..he'll get caught in the wall
ok.
ghost is wack, he aint coming for the throne
Claiming rock hard,
.......But to me he just a stepping stone
ok.
Kinda like ya dick son....it never been laid
When i say honeys are "on the Gho"..I mean their walking away
tough lol.
when i snuff you out, you gonna leak ya blood
the combo i'll throw at ya grill...ya bound to get a kick outta
ok.

*Blaze for consistency.

[Nashvillain]

1.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328026
2.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328029
3.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328035
4.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328082
5.http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=328039

[Taz™]

young ghost.

JR does got some wack heads...but narc,your the worst
*BLAZE*,LMAO.....i barely seen a spark in your verse
^this was cool. could do w/ a better set up

the rest, was shaky , not really standing out.

VS

*Blaze*

Kinda like ya dick son....it never been laid
When i say honeys are "on the Gho"..I mean their walking away
^cool-ish

the rest of your verse was , not really giving a vibe,

well. having to decide, from your un-quoted lines,
for better, meh- lines.

VOTE: *Blaze* . w/ a stronger verse

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[Mariah]

JR does got some wack heads...but narc,your the worst
*BLAZE*,LMAO.....i barely seen a spark in your verse
decent only cause it's played

vs.

Kinda like ya dick son....it never been laid
When i say honeys are "on the Gho"..I mean their walking away
ha ok

Meh battle. Both had 1 ok line, but Blaze came harder

v/Blaze

[nastizzle]

when I spit you go seven shades darker
cuz d way I tumble on the mic i'm bound to loose ma marker
i'm gonna sweep dust and throw you with ma parker