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Thread: Week 9 - Sneeky (2 - 4) Vs Taytay (2 - 2)

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    Re: Week 9 - Sneeky (2 - 4) Vs Taytay (2 - 2)

    You’re a washed up fuck you have nothing u best believe
    But I guess you are sneaky,
    How else would you of gotten into the league?
    (Cool)
    seriously, this kids wack, to beat him it dont take much
    cuz this dude must be numb, the way he lost his touch
    (Meh)
    nobody likes your audios, so dont step to me ull get rattled
    cuz were all hoping ^........is what we tell you after this battle
    (Lol)
    u shoulda been in the tripple threat, even there u would die
    but u dont need to meet with them, your still the seminar eyes
    (Aight)
    my punches are sick, im on a fastbreak to making you bleed
    so ud think D.S was ur coach,
    the way hes gonna give you some timeout of the league
    (Cool)

    Vs.

    you'll experience no motion for days, kid I hope you get saved
    after I bury you alive with a kind hand like placin' a rose to the grave
    (Meh)
    you'll get choked if you stay, look at you verse, just run for it
    cuz you showed up with a loss on which way to go, like dumb tourists
    (Okay)
    so are u done forest....or will you take another hit?
    cuz you winnin' is probably lyin' bigger than Bubba's lips
    (Nope)
    this fucker's sick, I mean...what kind of shit is he ON?
    either he's brave, bronze balled or he's just mentally gone
    (Meh)
    he'll breadown, not speak for weeks, prolly not eat for two
    you're gonna need plenty of wood to build that bridge to get over
    me beatin you
    (Aight)

    V/ Tay

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    Re: Week 9 - Sneeky (2 - 4) Vs Taytay (2 - 2)

    Good Battle Tay......I Quit this League!

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    Re: Week 9 - Sneeky (2 - 4) Vs Taytay (2 - 2)

    Vote - Tay

    More consistancy, more enjoyable verse.

    Tay - You started out strong, fell off a bit at the end. Try not to force the wordplay (seminar) came off a bit forced, but you had some humerous lines I liked.

    Sneek - A few decent concepts, but your wording seemed off on most of them. Your last line seemed stretched, so it didn't hit well. You could've one this if you had better wording.

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    Re: Week 9 - Sneeky (2 - 4) Vs Taytay (2 - 2)

    You’re a washed up fuck you have nothing u best believe
    But I guess you are sneaky,
    How else would you of gotten into the league?
    aight
    seriously, this kids wack, to beat him it dont take much
    cuz this dude must be numb, the way he lost his touch
    decent
    nobody likes your audios, so dont step to me ull get rattled
    cuz were all hoping ^........is what we tell you after this battle
    no
    u shoulda been in the tripple threat, even there u would die
    but u dont need to meet with them, your still the seminar eyes
    lol aight
    my punches are sick, im on a fastbreak to making you bleed
    so ud think D.S was ur coach,
    the way hes gonna give you some timeout of the league
    ehhh


    vs.


    you'll experience no motion for days, kid I hope you get saved
    after I bury you alive with a kind hand like placin' a rose to the grave
    nah
    you'll get choked if you stay, look at you verse, just run for it
    cuz you showed up with a loss on which way to go, like dumb tourists
    no
    so are u done forest....or will you take another hit?
    cuz you winnin' is probably lyin' bigger than Bubba's lips
    wtf no
    this fucker's sick, I mean...what kind of shit is he ON?
    either he's brave, bronze balled or he's just mentally gone
    decent
    he'll breadown, not speak for weeks, prolly not eat for two
    you're gonna need plenty of wood to build that bridge to get over me beatin you
    lol pretty good



    vote..tay tay

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    Re: Week 9 - Sneeky (2 - 4) Vs Taytay (2 - 2)

    12-6 and word sneeky

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    Re: Week 9 - Sneeky (2 - 4) Vs Taytay (2 - 2)

    sneeky-you came with good i guess. You just started off too rough.
    Like i definately thought that opener was wack as fuck. 2nd bar was a lil better.
    but nothin really good came till your last 4 lines..You got good concepts and thats
    what i liked..but the way you said shit was...off.

    Tay-This is definately better then the las verse i read which was wack. You just came stronger from the beginnin, and kept at it almost throughout your whole verse. I definately liked your concepts on this one, better. You still didn't come dope, but i think you came stronger.


    v.tay.
    uh, which way did he go? which way did he gooo?

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    Re: Week 9 - Sneeky (2 - 4) Vs Taytay (2 - 2)

    13 - 6 to TayTay and Winner by TKO

    TayTay Wins (3 - 1)
    Sneeky Loses (2 - 6)*


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