Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
those were alright..first was kinda stretched but still..other kid had nothing rreally
edit wrong person
v/ lm
Last edited by Jonezy; March 1st, 2007 at 06:07 PM
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
no
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
meh
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
played
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
needed better wording
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
played
vs
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
played
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
wow no
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
no
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
filler
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
doesnt even rhyme, plus played
V/ Lyrical_Manic
although you both came played and wack.
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
good concept, but stretched...
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
meh.
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
ok.
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
ok.
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
ok finisher
vs.
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
no.
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
nah...
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
ok.
(No Homo)
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
no.
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
meh k.
*Very weak on Cyph's part, didnt like wording nor structure, and when i read, you have the concepts, but no wording...once you get better wordin you will bstr8; but good battle from you none-the less...
V/LM
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Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
wow major fuk up there
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
nop
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
nop
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
nop
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
fuck no
no punches whatsoever stretched weak.. my suggestion read LLL battles n look at urs.
Ur verses have more out-of-place lines, than a damn US map got
I stay 'loggin'-in 2 ya lady friend, more than I do w/ my damn laptop
mo
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
played
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
no
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
best of the battle but still weak man
(No Homo)
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
meh
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
nah
v/cyph better evrything
LM- Well...the opener was ok...3rd bar was decent...and 5th bar was ok...pretty ok verse, solid enough I mean. You have the basics down, now be meaner when you punch at him. Cool for your first battle.
Cyph- The computer line was decent, but that's all you really had, not bad for such low post ocunt I guess and you're not an alias obviously, soo good effort, you need to work a bit on some of your wording and your punches though.
v/LM
Wu-Tang Forever
Nothing Was The Same
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
vs.
nothing
cyph had played concepts thru out his verse...he had the usage of punches but they werent as effective as he coulda made 'em...seemed pretty one sided since lyrical maniac had at least 1 good line and nothing much else that effected his stand out, that one good bar gave him the advance in this battle...
v/ LM
BRAZIL
Cyph, go and redo all your votes or you will be booted from the League.
If you want a reason, quoting other peoples votes into your post is unacceptable.
So be quick.
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
nah famo
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
decentish
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
str8
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
I like this
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
Nope
vs
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
nah maybe the next one you'll throw a punch...
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
stick to fl
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
omg no
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
waccck
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
No
v/Lyrical_Maniac
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fuck it this a short vote coz time is short.
vote lyrical maniac
cyph had wordplays i was using years ago.so LM had more originality and bettewr flow
bye
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Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
^^^no at this opener
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
^^^okay
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
^^^okay
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
^^^no
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
^^^no this closers wack
vs
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
^^^no wack opener/ played
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
^^^okay
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
^^^decent
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
^^^nah
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
^^^no
V/lyrical_maniac....this was a pretty weak one...cyph had one okay line the rest was no..Lm had a stronger verse atleast he had attempts with more some punchs and better nameplays
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
vs.
Not Much I seen.
V.LM...
Why didn't y'all delete my ugly ass sig while I was gone?
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