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10 lines
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a legacy is what i'm trying to leave.
checkin in.
a legacy is what i'm trying to leave.
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second coming what? u come early the first time?
u get a bit excited when u saw my last rhyme?
thats flattering dog, but its pretty fuckin weird,
i suppose when u drop shit like i do u get groupie queers,
but its cool dog, i should have expected it,
cos u spit like a junkie, just lookin for his next hit,
anything goes in ur shit, u got no content,
no lyrical prowess, ulike my shit which is constant,
if i slay u now homie, u comin a third time,
i'd say ur gonna have to, cos i've had this since the first line.
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you're dull, the only time you'll deliver 'sharp' is if you brought a knife
and there'll be no E.R. to shock ya and bring you back to life
you've been unactive since April, dog, why'd you decide to come back?
when it comes to being wack, this dude's on 'point' like a thumb tack.
we both noweights, but talent wise, we ain't in the same boat..
... because this dude's in shock every time he gets a single vote!
Shock is consistent w/ his lines ... every verse has a weak end..
^ tried to key himself a victory, but found Locksmith's aren't open on weekends!
Get outta here, you're soft.. even i'm kinda embarassed by you..
you're 21 now, next time don't come back til your twenty-two!
a legacy is what i'm trying to leave.
alright. uppin this battle.
don't sleep on it!
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a legacy is what i'm trying to leave.
what the hell, why'd you change your age?
it said your birthday was May 16th, 1985...
w/e.
a legacy is what i'm trying to leave.
it was wrong i didn't notice till u pointed it out
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second coming what? u come early the first time?
u get a bit excited when u saw my last rhyme?
( meh)
thats flattering dog, but its pretty fuckin weird,
i suppose when u drop shit like i do u get groupie queers,
( lol)
but its cool dog, i should have expected it,
cos u spit like a junkie, just lookin for his next hit,
( basic)
anything goes in ur shit, u got no content,
no lyrical prowess, ulike my shit which is constant,
( slef glory)
if i slay u now homie, u comin a third time,
(..)
you're dull, the only time you'll deliver 'sharp' is if you brought a knife
and there'll be no E.R. to shock ya and bring you back to life
( basic)
you've been unactive since April, dog, why'd you decide to come back?
when it comes to being wack, this dude's on 'point' like a thumb tack.
( played)
we both noweights, but talent wise, we ain't in the same boat..
... because this dude's in shock every time he gets a single vote!
( ight)
Shock is consistent w/ his lines ... every verse has a weak end..
^ tried to key himself a victory, but found Locksmith's aren't open on weekends!
( lol)
Get outta here, you're soft.. even i'm kinda embarassed by you..
you're 21 now, next time don't come back til your twenty-two!
( weak)
both came good at points, weak atothers, overall a close battle but i gotta give it to second for more consistant punches, everything esle once again was dead even wordplay , vocab, flow n strucutre were even
second came with some personals though thas why he got my vote.
v.second
better persoanls
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we both noweights, but talent wise, we ain't in the same boat..
... because this dude's in shock every time he gets a single vote!
vs nothing
pretty solid verse here from second coming, some of the concepts could have been implemented (ER and locksmith one in particular)
shock u need to talk about yourself a little less, ur first 2 bars had me chuckle a little but everything was a pretty basic and you were just outclassed
and if u want to return some decent feed just hit the OM in my sig
v/ 2nd
IJL
second coming what? u come early the first time?
u get a bit excited when u saw my last rhyme?
( meh)
thats flattering dog, but its pretty fuckin weird,
i suppose when u drop shit like i do u get groupie queers,
( lol)
but its cool dog, i should have expected it,
cos u spit like a junkie, just lookin for his next hit,
( basic)
anything goes in ur shit, u got no content,
no lyrical prowess, ulike my shit which is constant,
( slef glory)
if i slay u now homie, u comin a third time,
(..)
you're dull, the only time you'll deliver 'sharp' is if you brought a knife
and there'll be no E.R. to shock ya and bring you back to life
( basic)
you've been unactive since April, dog, why'd you decide to come back?
when it comes to being wack, this dude's on 'point' like a thumb tack.
( played)
we both noweights, but talent wise, we ain't in the same boat..
... because this dude's in shock every time he gets a single vote!
( ight)
Shock is consistent w/ his lines ... every verse has a weak end..
^ tried to key himself a victory, but found Locksmith's aren't open on weekends!
( lol)
Get outta here, you're soft.. even i'm kinda embarassed by you..
you're 21 now, next time don't come back til your twenty-two!
( weak)
v//second..for reasons above
two more votes needed.
don't sleep
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a legacy is what i'm trying to leave.
second coming what? u come early the first time?
u get a bit excited when u saw my last rhyme?
eh ok
thats flattering dog, but its pretty fuckin weird,
i suppose when u drop shit like i do u get groupie queers,
no gay self glory
but its cool dog, i should have expected it,
cos u spit like a junkie, just lookin for his next hit,
wah no
anything goes in ur shit, u got no content,
no lyrical prowess, ulike my shit which is constant,
self glory
if i slay u now homie, u comin a third time,
i'd say ur gonna have to, cos i've had this since the first line.
ight nice ending
vs
you're dull, the only time you'll deliver 'sharp' is if you brought a knife
and there'll be no E.R. to shock ya and bring you back to life
ah k i guest
you've been unactive since April, dog, why'd you decide to come back?
when it comes to being wack, this dude's on 'point' like a thumb tack.
ight lol
we both noweights, but talent wise, we ain't in the same boat..
... because this dude's in shock every time he gets a single vote!
nice lol
Shock is consistent w/ his lines ... every verse has a weak end..
^ tried to key himself a victory, but found Locksmith's aren't open on weekends!
wat no gayy
Get outta here, you're soft.. even i'm kinda embarassed by you..
you're 21 now, next time don't come back til your twenty-two!
stop with the marks---------------------------------------^
V// 2nd coming resons^^^^^^^^
hit me up
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second coming what? u come early the first time?
u get a bit excited when u saw my last rhyme?
Deccent.
thats flattering dog, but its pretty fuckin weird,
i suppose when u drop shit like i do u get groupie queers,
No.
but its cool dog, i should have expected it,
cos u spit like a junkie, just lookin for his next hit,
No.
anything goes in ur shit, u got no content,
no lyrical prowess, ulike my shit which is constant,
No.
if i slay u now homie, u comin a third time,
i'd say ur gonna have to, cos i've had this since the first line.
Decent.
V.
you're dull, the only time you'll deliver 'sharp' is if you brought a knife
and there'll be no E.R. to shock ya and bring you back to life
Bleh, Decent.
you've been unactive since April, dog, why'd you decide to come back?
when it comes to being wack, this dude's on 'point' like a thumb tack.
No.
we both noweights, but talent wise, we ain't in the same boat..
... because this dude's in shock every time he gets a single vote!
Decent.
Shock is consistent w/ his lines ... every verse has a weak end..
^ tried to key himself a victory, but found Locksmith's aren't open on weekends!
No.
Get outta here, you're soft.. even i'm kinda embarassed by you..
you're 21 now, next time don't come back til your twenty-two!
No.
Vote: Shock cuz both his decent lines were better punches then Seconds'.
Hit up my battle agaisnt $Real$.
you're dull, the only time you'll deliver 'sharp' is if you brought a knife
and there'll be no E.R. to shock ya and bring you back to life
we both noweights, but talent wise, we ain't in the same boat..
... because this dude's in shock every time he gets a single vote!
Dope
Vs.
Nothing.
Second Coming Just Owned Shock.
I Can Tell Second Coming Is Going To Be One Of The Dopest In Fl At This Time. I Enjoyed His Verse. I Liked The Vote Line ALOT. It Was Dope, On Line, And Just Pretty Dopey. So I look Forward To See Your Next Battle..
Shock-Ur Wack Dood. I'm Srry. None Of Your Verse caught My Eye. Most Of It Was Basic. Basicily ELEVATE SON.
V//Second Coming
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