".. And Running" - Feat. Belligerant

[Dyl]

Yeah this was a well put together collab and you pulled it off nicely.You didn't go for the complexed read thank gos because i'm sooo fucking tired right now, but you went for a nice simple approach with some beautiful wording.Cry to me you seem to be improving as a writer big time.Full of fresh ideas that always keep me reading.You are one of few writers that I think drop consistantly.Bell the same goes for you....you have been writing some cool pieces these days but you yet have to become concictant, but hey I can see that coming soon if you keep at it.Nice read guys, and I actually read this a while ago just never got around to feeding it.oz

-Dyl

[Soule]

Thanks man, we needed some feedback realy bad.

[Soule]

Upping.

[Floyd Powell]

my depth is gone, and my bungee cord is broken ..
and as much as i spoke out to you, i was never outspoken



very dope... keep it comin

[Soule]

Thanks.

[Soule]

Funny how we get the top collab in the Poetry Mag yet no one nominates us as a HoF peice. Saddens me. Rise.

[D. Josey]

Kid, you are so naive. You need to grow up.

[Soule]

I'll grow up when I feel its needed.