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    "The Graffiti Artist"

    "The Graffiti Artist"

    be it a portrait or sketch, it wasnt hard to get his mother to boast
    at breakfast, he was the type to literally paint his butter on toast
    yet eventually the artist in him became a mid-summers day ghost
    ‘n sadly before he met his callin, his inner-youngster met growth
    but he knew he still had it all! in a life, some shutters dont close
    for he had a skill and a wall, it was time that he brush up on both

    the naked wall called to him, in an instant, he’d jot a work plan
    and after years of hearing the word CAN’T, he got his first can
    he started at night…but embarked with a bright spark in his eye
    that somehow allowed him to harness the light darkness denied
    it was rationalization vs. his artist inside... armed with his pride
    his brush offered a stroke of genius with the smartest of strides
    ‘God damn my hearts a bad guide!!’ the kid scoffed with a smirk
    cuz now that he finally followed the thing, he got lost in his work
    he swiftly bathed the wall with paint, he smothered it with haste
    and graciously gave it every shade, including the color in his face
    it absorbed each drop like soil plains that been floodless for years
    this kid redefined the 3 primary colors- with blood, sweat, 'n tears
    he fought thru the strife, paintin a name he thought up that night
    but he didn't just personify the wall, he actually brought it to life
    tho his childhood curse was uplifted wit the word he had written
    he wasnt content, with this person’s ambition it hurt to be driven
    cuz he had perfect precision that could rival a surgeon’s incision
    but the worst indecision when it came to his version of finished
    yet some saw the worth he had given to the earth we all live in
    nothin as influential emerged from a vision since birth of religion

    it’d be a poster to me, but some bitched “its all over the street!”
    kid plugged into his creative outlet ‘n shocked both the extremes
    popular political pricks pushed for prison, probably 20 years flat
    to penalize a picture perfect paintin the public paused to peer at?
    ‘its pollution!’ parlor moms pose arguments as they part their mop
    and then pitch their partially-smoked parliaments in the parkin-lot
    he aint purposely persuade packs a people to the particular game
    they just found a wall, ‘n like an alliteration, all started the same
    pummeled with persecution…the painters were going thru a test
    they were in their right mind, but most people only use their left
    so everything the artists posted was attacked ‘n called into focus
    its poetic justice that before the graffiti the wall went unnoticed
    media told the facts: its peer pressure parents, so scold their ass!
    they'd follow him off a bridge, but he already tagged the overpass
    how trend setting was he? some people were swept off their feet!
    he didnt just paint the town red......he painted it ready to read
    cuz dammit it wasnt damage! why’d anyone brand him a bandit?
    he could manage to see an artistic side on the back of a canvass
    he cant even admit he did this, gets dismissed like sun-shines are
    making a painting he cant claim.. like a gift with an unsigned card
    to this day hes a name that isnt reppin a face, but u bet its okay
    ....its easier to see someone’s soul without their flesh in the way
    so the poet in him’ll keep going forever, and hopes eternities late
    even though his intellectual property doesnt have a security gate

    this story’s not false....lies or a dream, i'll explain how i planned it
    this board was the wall, i was the he, 'n the name was Kidanimus
    vet to sensation, i wrote in present tense durin my text elevation
    so my every piece would be an easy read for the next generation
    my shit’ll live kids- in the future read 1 or 2 spits, and it’ll prove this
    cuz behind the new shit theres always a blue print on how to do it
    someday a cat’ll say my ideas are old…he wasnt there at the start
    ‘n if he went backwards, what he calls an artifact was in fact a art
    some tried to copy my paintings, i wont say vengeance is sweet
    but the most important prints they traced, were left with my feet
    we’re all graffiti artists! with made-up name to decoy a real sense
    and with a creativity that’s priceless to the point you feel spent
    i’ll be gone by day break, if im remembered i got ya’ll to thank
    the name was Kidanimus,
    …will it paint a picture or will you draw a blank?
    Last edited by Kidanimus; June 10th, 2006 at 11:02 AM

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    yo very nice piece man, i loved the wordplay, the rhyme scheme and it all flowed pretty nicely..pretty cool topic and i liked how you ended it up, overall man this was pretty dope, keep up the good work man, peace

    by the way can u leave feed on my drop "Back In Time ( Memories )" its in my sig and the open mic forum, if you could i would appreciate it, thanx

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    Ive Rtf..thx For Feed Jj..

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    Sick drop, man. You had some really nice flow and some nice wordplay. I got the feeling that it was a story too, which is good. Nice job.

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