Originally Posted by Bloodz4Life
hmm if it was an collab it wudda been better readin 2 cats views on tha topic.. but yeah it was enjoyable i liked readin it... had some good wordplay, emotion... yep this deffo is good.. keep at it aiite...1
hmm if it was an collab it wudda been better readin 2 cats views on tha topic.. but yeah it was enjoyable i liked readin it... had some good wordplay, emotion... yep this deffo is good.. keep at it aiite...1
''Crying Is Blackmail''
Jesus made wine from water, in the bible everybody got high
Moses paid homage to the burning bush; herb redden the Israelites eyes
Double-cross God & he’ll slay you, eternal fire sizzles the soul
Soldiers in khaki denim shooting venom leave you riddled with holes
Cash controls the nation; vagrants are classified as useless eaters
Cold orphans seek salvation; the weak are beaten by ruthless cheaters
As the sky turns tarnished & spews acid rain over my apartment
Mortals become gunned for treason, shot down by the higher marksman
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They say God hates losers, n lame excuses won’t help u on judgement day
When Lexus driving preachers pray, n sprinkle dust on your open grave
There’s always been war up in heaven, in the beginning was the Word
& the Word created the World, & the World was gangster, as it twirled
Thugs was born slugs was torn as hoodlums exchanged hard drugs for corn
While God watches us all on widescreen television between clips of porn
I did pray deeply, God must’ve been busy hustling like he can’t see me
Swear there a killer fiend in me I mean in my dreams there seems 2 b these
… Such violent depictions; is this science fiction? or bloodthirsty addiction?
I could show you a vision of me existing with innocent Muslims in prison
Living at-one with Christians who think different from hooligan politicians
Life's vicious, harsh wishes turn to curses as pervert judges make decisions
Freedom-of-speech is bullshit if I have to curb my opinion with edits, n cuts
Nah fuck! Forget it I’m stuck on crazy conspiracies, I need a medic, I’m nuts
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Born in Gods image I’m a G like him
The sky cracks open, & I’m announced as King
Weak creatures was made for wild hunters to kill
This is law of the jungle, plus this is Gods will
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God is a Gangster
God is a Gangster
God is a Gangster
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UNIQUE
thanx 4 da look.. yeah i was gonna holl" someone to collab.. but wrote it real quick n cudnt wait 2 drop it
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Sick...Very different...I liked it. The rhymes were tight, the rhythem was ok...could be a little better but over all, it was tight.
8/10
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ya this was aight I liked the flow but could use more meta4's and creativity but your killing it with the flow nice job man.
yo dawg i'm always down for a collab so if you ever wanna do one hit me up peace out
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Dope Lethal Lyricists
hip-hop's finest souljaz
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this my boo.......guess who it is
just dont do the
God is a gangster
God is a gangster
God is a gangster
thing at the end of a great peice like thet. It kills it I mean c'mon man.
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God is a Gangster
your feed is killin it fosho
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Nice peice realy felt it bro.
Flow, strcutre, wordpaly every thing was there.
Keep it up.
safe 4 checkin it..
n if people serious about doing a collab just hit me on the pm
coz i be like writing all the time about just about anything .. existing or non exisiting
this needs some better vocab.. the shit wasnt too bad but the structure was what made it fucked up you had some good flow in a way though you brought some good bars to it just work on the strutcure and flow a little bit more and thsi wouldve been straight
or maybe you just dont understand my flow.. n fuck structure that aint no great talent.. as long as the bars aint too stretched .. fuck it.. t5his shit flows on point
funny how it flow to some people and it dont to others..
guess its just how much understanding of hip hop flow you have..
n fuck uppin vocab as well.. if i up it half the world wont understand it.. this is all about imagery for me
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you wanna be apart of a collab yo cause this shit was dope me and Mindless doin a collab so holla if you want in it ~1~(sorry to freepost)
yeah fosho.. im just trynna elevate to new levels.. so a collab would be good.. ill tryn check out some yo stuff.. i seen 1 of mindless joints but aint replied yet..
pm me the concept or title if u got 1 already
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