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    My Broken Heart

    My heart was broken,
    I give u chocolates,
    But just as a token,
    Of my appreciation,
    U told me lies,like George bush,
    jus to please the nation,
    I had a feelin it would happen,
    but jus an inclination,
    U cheated,
    u enjoyed the thrill as ur heart beated,
    I suspected a chump ass lover,
    The situation was getin heated,
    As i was thinkin wat was goin on,
    out of desperation,
    i picked up the phone and rang my mom,
    and i said,
    I need to tell u whats goin on,
    she said hold on a minute ur dads jus walked in,
    hes in a grumpy ass mood and shouted get me a tin,
    Lazy fuk was out of work i wondered where he had bin,
    Then she walked in the bitch was smellin of gin,
    so shes passed out on the floor,
    so i picked up her purse,
    to see what was in,
    My dads credit card there it was jus lyin in,
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    yo this was aight. i like how it ended an it had some imagery but not alot. you need to work on ya flow a lil bit but other than that it was pretty good. peace out dawg

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    kk ill take it on board
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    tricky trix
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    you pretty good could use some elavation

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    thanx for the feed
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