Rap

[Nexus]

Hello I'm new, I wanna rap, I wanna rap as fast as you wont understand.
The whole point is not to get you down, My rap is not provocating,
no demonstration. Well let's kick the rhyme, i have almost no time.
Yo, It was some time ago, I rapped alone in my home, tried to do a song demo, failed on that cuz i'm some little ego! Here we go! Rapbattle is a cool site,
i found it for 2 mins ago, aight? So i dont know what you wanna know, because knowing to much can take to slow. I rap about random shit, erm, I've forgot to admit. I love rap because I do, so i think it's also good for you.

If you think I'm rich that's wrong!, I have no Limo, no car, nothing so FAR.
I just want that all you know, I can't rap so don't be mad, This is the last rhyme
you gonna read now man.

[Change]

damn you wack!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[KOS]

LOL^^^^^^^^^^^^^ agreed

[Nexus]

I'm what? You've said IM wack? Nah, my rap is premium quality snack.
If you gonna eat that, look you gonna be glad. If you're glad, what is the problem to the fan? You still don't understand?, I accept it because I'm Man.
I have some serius fast brain, the brain can work together with my mind. I think fast as the light of speed this time. I'm not cocky im just original, like the coca-cola logo, do you flow that ah? what?

[KOS]

u edited ur post, and im better than most, so if ur rady go then throw sum down so u dont look like a ho

[Nexus]

no matter what you say, I'm going to keep my rap this way, whatever i'm more clever, are you seriusly calling me ho? 44 Minutes Ago?

[EyeBite]

pointless and very weak..no good rhymes..not a good topic
vocab was not here at all....imagery nada...effort i say 0
This was so simple and weak and pointless yo....really elevate
use multies up vocab and pick better topics man..peace

[chr0me]

lol wtf u on crack man?

ok: agreed u shud pick a deeper topic
agreed your rymes were simple at best

structure was non existant 2 me

keep practising nd elevatin

come back with a much betta piece nxt time yea

PEACE

[Nexus]

lol wtf u on crack man?

ok: agreed u shud pick a deeper topic
agreed your rymes were simple at best

structure was non existant 2 me

keep practising nd elevatin

come back with a much betta piece nxt time yea

PEACE

Yeh man thankz for this all, I gotta train this with beatz and lyric and my rhymes aint the best but somewhere I've gotta start this, respect, brotha!

[lady_Desiree]

this was some straight up bullshit. if you improve ya skills maybe you will drop something that comes better than what you brought the flow wasnt on point also you need to pick a topic and rap off of that maybe you will rub off with something decent to read