feedback please upping................
feedback please upping................
uppin
that was a fuckin crazy rap evry thing was good about is structure vocab etc. comment on my first om http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=254498
thx for the feedback,.....i'll get to yours
iight thx its my first om though so it might be whack but ill leave it up to u to decide lol
bump for feedback...
bump.
some pretty nice shit i like the line with the ball good stuff i loved it and i love ur flow excelent!!
thx for the feedback,.....upping for more
this piece flow real nice...........topic was str8. but i liked how you stuck to ya topic. the structure was ok to understand..real clear to understand. your vocab was ok. nice drop...7/10
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thx for the feedback hommie
wtf @ you non-feedbackin mo fo's
deep piece man..thats a great drop and with imagery and meaning behind every one of your lines, i'd love to peep more of ya pieces in tha future. This had so much meaning i thought as it was like you was the only person keeping you sane through all the mentality. I saw this as a kind of psychotic piece lol, in a good way.... but also a caring and heart felt piece where most if not all people could relate to.
The imagery was pretty good and the lines were stretched in it. but that didnt bother me because of the story line and deepness of this piece. Was def a dope drop.
Keep it up homie.
Could ya please vote on some on my battles in return. Would be appreciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=256920
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=256529
Thnx fam, keep dropin tha hotness
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thx for the feed,....i'll get to it
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