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  1. October 31st, 2005, 01:21 AM #1
    BigBoss
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    Its Over

    Its dis supa thowed Texas Cat spittin Wreckless Facts
    Wit my high IQ, unlike you cuz ya intellect is flat
    You can ask anybody in Texas from Houston to Dallas
    I been Defeatin and Beatin MCs 'till they skin gets Callused
    It's kinda Complicated, bottom line I can't be Duplicated
    If I got jumped by a Washing Machine I still couldnt be Faded!!
    I used to be the very best ever...then I Elevated
    Its like I won the Election but I never Debated

    Because my rhyme-book is the Best-kid, the time I took and Invested
    Every verse is practically platnium, might as well be diamond Incrested
    Yes-kid Im respected, never tested, cuz Im Loyal to my Hood
    Some say I stick to my team like crazy-glue Spoiled on Wood
    Never Negected, Pimp game Perfected like its no Big-Deal
    Cuz even when I was 3, I was pimpin girls on my Big-Wheel!!
    Years later, after many more haters, I proved it wasnt Hoe-Luck
    Because I still Pull so many girls that they call me the Tow-Truck!
    Droppin lyrical bombs, Osamas got nothin on my Fleet
    My voice vibrate the air and make tha hoes Skeet-Skeet!!

    Listen, Just put me on tha roster, I wont take it for Granted
    I'll have so many MCs in my pocket I'll start walkin Slanted
    If I get down with this crew, theres not gonna be time to Debate-on-It
    Cuz my flows are so Cold, I'll write them down then we'll Skate-on-It

    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...04#post3393604
    http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...90#post3393690
    -Boss
    Last edited by BigBoss; November 2nd, 2005 at 05:24 PM

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  2. October 31st, 2005, 01:22 AM #2
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    That was just a lil something i wrote real quick to try out for a crew, i was bored so i posted it up on here..structure sux, but its entertaining to read, so what tha heck...
    peace,
    -Boss

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  3. November 2nd, 2005, 01:50 PM #3
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    feed

    Uppin 4 feed...

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  4. November 2nd, 2005, 04:20 PM #4
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    You need 2 links to 2 open mics you've left decent feedback on or this will be closed. If you up this again without links it will be closed.

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  5. November 2nd, 2005, 05:25 PM #5
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    I got tha links up... now uppin for feed..

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  6. November 3rd, 2005, 04:06 PM #6
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    that was good tight vocab
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  7. November 3rd, 2005, 04:46 PM #7
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    The struture is good....some of tha shit you spit was played....and tha multis were quite basic also.... keep elevatin though you got potential...
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  8. November 3rd, 2005, 05:19 PM #8
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    well......this was certainly a pretty good drop..flow and strucutre was good...topic was aiight......not too creative...it seemed very fermiluar......vocab was good...pretty complex but not too complex...strucutre was good..nice drop..keep it up...peace
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  9. November 3rd, 2005, 07:59 PM #9
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    Quote Originally Posted by .::PhySix::.
    The struture is good....some of tha shit you spit was played....and tha multis were quite basic also.... keep elevatin though you got potential...
    Structure was good??? i didnt think so, when i wrote it i wasnt really going for that cuz it was just a tryout.
    Im hoping this is an alias...

    Quote Originally Posted by ~Skribble~
    well......this was certainly a pretty good drop..flow and strucutre was good...topic was aiight......not too creative...it seemed very fermiluar......vocab was good...pretty complex but not too complex...strucutre was good..nice drop..keep it up...peace
    it didnt really have a topic... it was a freestyle that i typed up for a tryout. it looks familiar probably cuz ive posted a couple times on other parts of tah site i was just bored and wanted to get some feedbaclk on it. But thanks for tha feedback,

    peace

    -BOSS
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  10. November 4th, 2005, 09:16 AM #10
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    lol

    lol skribble gave the best feed back, anyway this was ayt, i'm trying to peep other people's threads now since peeps on hur be reading my shit and not replying um change my ways. Anyway your vocab could be upped on this and the lines for me were a little too stretch out, but it was nice 1st post i've red by you-keep it up
    written voices makes hidden noises
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  11. November 4th, 2005, 10:36 AM #11
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    ..yeah you right bout the structure..but apart from that is was aight...tha flow 7 vocab was str8...the only thing i would say bout it is that the start is stronger than the end...if you kept consistency up..it would be a better piece..1
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