Typical Stereo-Type

[Godly Boarder]

[ Since I got my hand in the biz,
Of glamour and glitz ..
.. Every other stanza I spits, bout a hammer and clips,
What hangs from my wrist,
or how you cant hold a candle to this ..
Spent a couple grand at The Ritz,
Im the man little kids ..
.. Aspire to be -

Even when im just rambling, shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit!

Haha, just idle banter. HOLLA! ]

[Baron Mynd]

Boooooooo .. Ive tried to search back for my replies but the search thing doenst appear to be working? Must be because the admins are updating the board. Ive responded to about eight different threads.

[warchild]

This was too short in my opinion wasnt even half a verse.
Your flow was real nice but there was no nice imagery or really a story pretty pointless. Your verses would be nice if you actually wrote a verse instead of fucking about lol. Think of a good concept and write a couple of verses then you'll get better feedback. Nice flow but thats it.
Return the feed on my Om:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=243081

[Baron Mynd]

I dont see how it was pointless. Last time you commented on the imagery and storytelling, but quite simply - Imagery and storytelling hold no relevence in pieces like this. Basically, I was just fucking about. You fail to comment on the rhyme schemes and multi-strings and focus everything on vocab, imagery and storytelling. This forum is prepostourous, and THATS why I dont feel like writing anything.

[warchild]

I said your flow was nice but it was too short to #give a lot of feed if yopu cant be bothered to write longer pieces wats the point in putting them up.

[Mic D]

wow...that was short...damn....a lil bit of skill wit multies shining through...but damn....its too short to tell

[eye_elle_elle]

uh....it was ok but it was way too short. but the name was hot. I could tell you was tryin but you should've made it longer.

[Mistral]

16 line minimum.