Birth Of A Lyricist

[Young Mista T]

I like to welcome everbody to my side of the universe
While I lay knowledge upon ya n certify my lyrical birth/
I was born on nine two three in eight five
Landed feet first n every since its been a struggle for me to stay alive/
Cuz its a cold world n these hot head niggas is carrin heat
On the streets is where you win or you will definitly meet defeat/
So I dare not speak any flawed infomation about what I teach
Instead I breach the secured sector of ya mental like a pshycicleech/
N determine the deepest fears of each individual I meet
So I'm two steps ahead of the game that way I can never be beat/
Imma mastermind wit calculated punchlines n premeditated metaphors
I'm livin in first place so of course my cheddah must be bettah than yours/
I made concrete kitchens into marble floors
Turned cubic zeconias into real diamond cores
But in order to afford all of the that things I desire
I must stay on the grind until I make the competition perspire/
N spit fire until theres no more heat left in the tank
Then tally up the aftermath n cruise on to the bank/
Now I might be wishful thinkin but unlike others atleast I got some goals
N willin to take the hardest path if I have to just to reach them goals/
Gotta stay on my toes n keep elevatin the game to a higher plateau
N Put my self outta reach of fake gangstas n mc's that nobody knows/
Imma create my own destiny n decide some other's along the way
That is if you try to stop me Imma knock you out my way/
N straighten the path n pave the rocky roads n burnt bridges
Maybe even lengthen the journey just so I can increase the significant digits/
Just listen thats the only tool critical to my exsistence
Its my business to measure the ingediences of the lyrical distance/
Thats pleasurble to the ears and minds of the many who recieve it
I'm here to make the experience even bettah all you have to do is believe it/
I'll never leave it cuz the game is magic to me
N this little ryhme is nothin compared to the rest that is implanted in me/
But until I reveal the rest I guess you must hang to the words that are displayed
Cuz I'm out n I'm disposin all of the Haterade/

[~ladie_streetz~]

dam son, your flow came ridiculouly lame in this, i wanst feeling the flow you dropped with this shit. teh vocab was way too basic. this should have had more hot type rhymes from it. this needs alot of improvement to write some shit like this maybe some rhymes taht arent simple would work and a more organized structure to come with so that it fits a good flow and helps readers understand what they're reading. at times your vocab and flow was hot but at times you seemed to sorta daze off with it and loose track

[Young Mista T]

^^aye...just fuck u...u cant read gurl....links: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3350898

[NaS]

dam son, your flow came ridiculouly lame in this, i wanst feeling the flow you dropped with this shit. teh vocab was way too basic. this should have had more hot type rhymes from it. this needs alot of improvement to write some shit like this maybe some rhymes taht arent simple would work and a more organized structure to come with so that it fits a good flow and helps readers understand what they're reading. at times your vocab and flow was hot but at times you seemed to sorta daze off with it and loose track

Agreed

[~ladie_streetz~]

i can read. im one the mothafuckas on the site who would actually read everyones shit. you lucky to get feed. this gonna get closed anyways so i suggest you stop the shit talk before its over.
said and done. dont have time for tyhe cry baby talk. good bye

[NaS]

^^aye...just fuck u...u cant read gurl....links: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3350898

Nigga... you betcha watch who you talk to, i don't give a fuck if this is a net, TALK TO NO GIRL like dat, iight?.. OHhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, i wish some nigga like this would pop off to my lil sista on some half-assd hard body shit.

You act like all the feed u gon get is compliments, how u gon improve if ur already "good" as u think u is? This shit was wack, no concept, no creativeness, no vocab, was simply half-assed. In your next drop, get some concept and creativity, and you'll be straight. Hate it or loveit..


-one

[Young Mista T]

learn how to spell to gurl ("tyhe") ^lmao

[Young Mista T]

fuck u 2 fella....if you want it then dont type about, be about it you feel me

[NaS]

fuck u 2 fella....if you want it then dont type about, be about it you feel me

-----------------------
From: Tha Dirty South |
Age: 20 |
-----------------------

might wanna ease up, iight?

[Young Mista T]

what u spose to be...a stalka or sumthin...get off my dick nigga n get a life and A ORIGINAL NAME BITCH

[~ladie_streetz~]

i type fast so sometimes i have errors in my shit. wow! you really did point out something terribly big

[Young Mista T]

^look lets just squash all this shit in battle

[NaS]

^look lets just squash all this shit in battle

lets..

[Young Mista T]

^aiight then you know what to do

[Real As It Get]

Dis shit was aight. i think that your lines were too damn long but some of dat shit was good. I gotta agree wit lady streets on your vocab. you should step that shit up. 7/10
~one~