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    yAfAVrAPPERSgHOSTWRITER jesta's Avatar
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    Split Personality

    Dear John,

    What happen between us? It seem you got a lot of shit going on right now.
    We driftin apart,didn't we used to hold each other down?
    It's not me it's you,and I refuse to even flip it backwards.
    Don't get upset about it.No need to throw a temper tantrum.
    Now I swear we acting cause all we do is play each other.
    If we this dirty we might as well stay in gutters.
    I just know that I can't keep playing all these games.
    I'm getting more mature so its time for a change.
    The love we had was spectacular, for real, no lie.
    Thought we could make it last forever but you wouldn't oblige.
    If only you would apply then maybe you'd see,
    that with all we have in common you was made for me.


    Sincerly,
    Jesta

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    yAfAVrAPPERSgHOSTWRITER jesta's Avatar
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    i accept and appreciate any and all feedback.

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    I enjoyed how u made the poem like a letter starting it out dear john.could of been a lil longer but still a good poem. i'll be lookin to hit up more of urs later on. comment on my poem "TRUE COLORS" in the meantime ~peace~
    ERASED

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