Even Odd
Who wanna go head 2 head, battle 4 da crown / look 6 my middle name, you get 8 before the 10th round-
Im da 1 and only champ, my comp's 3 floors down/ better hope da medics can re5 you after battlin da klown-
Spitten 7 out da clip, stop de9 my greatness/ Cuz when jaws drop da mac 11 gives facelifts-
Im a Kansas City King with my head in da sky/ Winnin all challenges EVEN against ODDS-
you really need to work on your skills in rap.
this was just basic, had nothing great that i would be comforatabe or interested in reading. the vocab suckedm, you didnt have much to come with. very short matter of fact. just try to do batter next time. facelifts, and greatness do not rhyme. sky and ods don't rhyme. try to rhyme the ending words to make it better. no hate
I see where you commin from. But its not how da word is spelled that makes it rhyme its how its said. And if it didnt rhyme 2 you you not sayin it right. Aw yeah it was meant 2 be simple I couldve broke out da vocab but it wasn't necessary. Sometimes you jest wanna get 2 da point. Chameen
Polls aren't too valuable in open mics. You said you wanted to get to the point, don't make it so short that it doesn't meet the line limit. I recognize your number concept. The placement of the numbers seemed forced to me. You could have worked them in better. You stated that it was meant to be simple, and it was. Post pieces that will make your work stand out.
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