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10-30 Lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Verses are due by FRIDAY 11:59 PM eastern.
Only LLL competitors may vote.
Damn, I started writing for P
Okay Vy lets go 16
With the matches people pissed they lost a verse to the beef
but spit better get some cash quick....
....cuz this is the second time i'mma have verse of the week
I'm crackin lids, ribs, smackin kids, and laughin quick
Cuz yea me and spit had problems...
....half as many as you did writin after your accident
Nigga since u hert ur head, ur verses have been thru
This is one hit your faggot ass wont live thru
Dont act witty or mad gritty, fuckin listen kid
u aint been on since rap cityz...
...and no one from rap battles was there to witness it
Dat Nig Ryan25: man im rusty as fuck, Oh! Okay!
I am too, but ur rustyness is different...
...It's called wackness, IT'LL NEVER GO AWAY!
Dont get my verse? then I see why you gone respect me
Cuz it's one big personal, somthin you've NEVER done correctly.
I'm a vet, you'll see, next you'll be left to eat
cuz i've known u longer then anyone @ rb...
... and you still dont get an ounce'a respect from me.
3 years motherfucker. and you aint won, once.
When it comes to vylent peeps u know who to call,
& I`ll show you the Midwest Swing & tattoo your jaw
Im grimey, Ima show u up, u can't write wit me
This pussy been on my Sac longer than Mike Bibby
Check the irony, U dick suckin herb u outta control
Caz bitches usually Spit, But he swallowed you whole
Wait Izze D Featable, I kno u remember that bitch
You got the Last Word in all our battles..
When you replied MidwestMufuqa: Horud dope shit!
Why you smilin pussy I'll destroy that smirk
Your fat is so extra, It put mediocre actors out of work
Ya dope shit is ghosted, I'm so hot that it hurts
Whose Line Is It Anyway comes to mind when ya droppin ya verse
When it comes to writing, pussy you can never tell us,
While you getting sent away,
I'll show ur mom a SHAFT so big, Samuel L will get jealous
Vote on mine and Com's LLL...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=212911
With the matches people pissed they lost a verse to the beef
but spit better get some cash quick....
....cuz this is the second time i'mma have verse of the week
Eh...kinda sorta...more like self prop...
I'm crackin lids, ribs, smackin kids, and laughin quick
Cuz yea me and spit had problems...
....half as many as you did writin after your accident
This sounded mean...
Nigga since u hert ur head, ur verses have been thru
This is one hit your faggot ass wont live thru
Again, mean...but why rhyme 'thru' with 'thru'?
Dont act witty or mad gritty, fuckin listen kid
u aint been on since rap cityz...
...and no one from rap battles was there to witness it
Pretty fuckin funny...
Dat Nig Ryan25: man im rusty as fuck, Oh! Okay!
I am too, but ur rustyness is different...
...It's called wackness, IT'LL NEVER GO AWAY!
Good concept, bad wording for me...
Dont get my verse? then I see why you gone respect me
Cuz it's one big personal, somthin you've NEVER done correctly.
Damn, real nice...
I'm a vet, you'll see, next you'll be left to eat
cuz i've known u longer then anyone @ rb...
... and you still dont get an ounce'a respect from me.
Kinda played concept here...
VS
When it comes to vylent peeps u know who to call,
& I`ll show you the Midwest Swing & tattoo your jaw
Eh...decent opener...
Im grimey, Ima show u up, u can't write wit me
This pussy been on my Sac longer than Mike Bibby
Funny meta...
Check the irony, U dick suckin herb u outta control
Caz bitches usually Spit, But he swallowed you whole
Eh...ok to so-so...
Wait Izze D Featable, I kno u remember that bitch
You got the Last Word in all our battles..
When you replied MidwestMufuqa: Horud dope shit!
Eh...
Why you smilin pussy I'll destroy that smirk
Your fat is so extra, It put mediocre actors out of work
Funny, good shit...
Ya dope shit is ghosted, I'm so hot that it hurts
Whose Line Is It Anyway comes to mind when ya droppin ya verse
Good concept, not thrilled with the execution of it...
When it comes to writing, pussy you can never tell us,
While you getting sent away,
I'll show ur mom a SHAFT so big, Samuel L will get jealous
Eh...pretty sure Shaft is played, if it's not, it's certainly obvious...
I think Vy hit more consistently...
Vote: Vylint
Peace
Thnx for the breakdown Born
1-0 You kid
Nigga since u hert ur head, ur verses have been thru
This is one hit your faggot ass wont live thru
Dat Nig Ryan25: man im rusty as fuck, Oh! Okay!
I am too, but ur rustyness is different...
...It's called wackness, IT'LL NEVER GO AWAY!
I'm a vet, you'll see, next you'll be left to eat
cuz i've known u longer then anyone @ rb...
... and you still dont get an ounce'a respect from me.
vs
Check the irony, U dick suckin herb u outta control
Caz bitches usually Spit, But he swallowed you whole
Wait Izze D Featable, I kno u remember that bitch
You got the Last Word in all our battles..
When you replied MidwestMufuqa: Horud dope shit!
Why you smilin pussy I'll destroy that smirk
Your fat is so extra, It put mediocre actors out of work
Ya dope shit is ghosted, I'm so hot that it hurts
Whose Line Is It Anyway comes to mind when ya droppin ya verse
When it comes to writing, pussy you can never tell us,
While you getting sent away,
I'll show ur mom a SHAFT so big, Samuel L will get jealous
vote horud... he suprised the shit outta me with a lot more quotables... most of vylints shit seemed indirect and boring and I think he underestimated horud who seemed start slow but finished with fire..
EDIT: btw vylint gets line of the match with "wackness/it'll never go away" line
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I'm crackin lids, ribs, smackin kids, and laughin quick
Cuz yea me and spit had problems...
....half as many as you did writin after your accident
Dat Nig Ryan25: man im rusty as fuck, Oh! Okay!
I am too, but ur rustyness is different...
...It's called wackness, IT'LL NEVER GO AWAY!
Dont get my verse? then I see why you gone respect me
Cuz it's one big personal, somthin you've NEVER done correctly.
v
Check the irony, U dick suckin herb u outta control
Caz bitches usually Spit, But he swallowed you whole
Wait Izze D Featable, I kno u remember that bitch
You got the Last Word in all our battles..
When you replied MidwestMufuqa: Horud dope shit!
Why you smilin pussy I'll destroy that smirk
Your fat is so extra, It put mediocre actors out of work
When it comes to writing, pussy you can never tell us,
While you getting sent away,
I'll show ur mom a SHAFT so big, Samuel L will get jealous
v/ h dot sky.
You really think ur tough... come 'n try me man
I’ll get a hiccup that isn’t spasms of the diaphragm
Wow I guess I'm shocked... 1-2 H Dot
vylint.
What is that? Sirus are you dickeating again?
2-2
remind me when was it that i last dinned on cock.
Dont act witty or mad gritty, fuckin listen kid
u aint been on since rap cityz...
...and no one from rap battles was there to witness it
Dat Nig Ryan25: man im rusty as fuck, Oh! Okay!
I am too, but ur rustyness is different...
...It's called wackness, IT'LL NEVER GO AWAY!
Dont get my verse? then I see why you gone respect me
Cuz it's one big personal, somthin you've NEVER done correctly.
vs.
Why you smilin pussy I'll destroy that smirk
Your fat is so extra, It put mediocre actors out of work
Vylint just had a more solid verse. H dot had a few good hits but his closer was played, the whose line anyway been done.. and his other punches didn't land that hard. This battle was somewhat close but Vylint edged it I thought.
vote - Vylint.
Ehhhhhhh. Seen it comin
Good shit Vy 2-3 You
Vylint:
With the matches people pissed they lost a verse to the beef
but spit better get some cash quick....
....cuz this is the second time i'mma have verse of the week
on some flex ish, i like this stuff in battles, makes it appealing but doesn't really diss your guy
I'm crackin lids, ribs, smackin kids, and laughin quick
Cuz yea me and spit had problems...
....half as many as you did writin after your accident
i'm not up to date with the personal
Nigga since u hert ur head, ur verses have been thru
This is one hit your faggot ass wont live thru
nah
Dont act witty or mad gritty, fuckin listen kid
u aint been on since rap cityz...
...and no one from rap battles was there to witness it
lol
Dat Nig Ryan25: man im rusty as fuck, Oh! Okay!
I am too, but ur rustyness is different...
...It's called wackness, IT'LL NEVER GO AWAY!
this was average
Dont get my verse? then I see why you gone respect me
Cuz it's one big personal, somthin you've NEVER done correctly.
good
I'm a vet, you'll see, next you'll be left to eat
cuz i've known u longer then anyone @ rb...
... and you still dont get an ounce'a respect from me.
straight forward personal, it does hit
Skys:
When it comes to vylent peeps u know who to call,
& I`ll show you the Midwest Swing & tattoo your jaw
aight, solid start
Im grimey, Ima show u up, u can't write wit me
This pussy been on my Sac longer than Mike Bibby
super played
Check the irony, U dick suckin herb u outta control
Caz bitches usually Spit, But he swallowed you whole
spit/swallowed ish is played
Wait Izze D Featable, I kno u remember that bitch
You got the Last Word in all our battles..
When you replied MidwestMufuqa: Horud dope shit!
not up wit the personal, same with one of vy's lines
Why you smilin pussy I'll destroy that smirk
Your fat is so extra, It put mediocre actors out of work
bad wording, shoulda had a better set up too
Ya dope shit is ghosted, I'm so hot that it hurts
Whose Line Is It Anyway comes to mind when ya droppin ya verse
you should have had more of a reference to the TV show in your set up
When it comes to writing, pussy you can never tell us,
While you getting sent away,
I'll show ur mom a SHAFT so big, Samuel L will get jealous
nah
vote-Vylint
after reading both verses all the way through, then doing a breakdown it was pretty obvious, Skys was ok, but he had alot of poorly worded lines and some played ones, too. Keep writin tho playa, Vylint was personal, had some arrogance and apathy which appealed to me, plus i was feelin his disses more.
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