Freely...speaking

[Big Blind]

I'm not feeling, the overseer when they illing
It seems everything I'm building they killing.
when I feel they chilling they show me different.
why ask why, when the reason is infinite.
I'm not in position so they want listen.
not diss'n just express'n how they be trip'n.
how they be cracking the whip.
got me feel'n like a slave trapped onna ship.
got me putt'n the fasten on my lips
scared to drop feel'n they gone trash my script.
If I ruled this world it would be no rules.
If you say its hot then it should be cool.
The only due payed is if you lose.
not cus you refuse to be a mule.
Yeah I know god bless the child that got his own.
Yeah yall mite own this site but ya got it all wrong.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=201329
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=201186

[Big Blind]

uppin mic

[Vertikle]

This was an average piece man........vocab wasn't that great.......Imagery was not to great either....Flow was ok.........And it read nice......But you need to put more feeling into your pieces.......Instead of trying to rhyme so good............7/10......Ok Job Man............

[Big Blind]

thats cool cus this piece was written base on flow
was just written what I was feeling at the time.