½ Crook -VS- Ayduu

[Taeisbeast.]

Rules:

5 barz- 10 lines

15 min blind drop

House Rules

G'd Luck homie

Check in and timer starts.

[½ Crook]

in................................................

[Taeisbeast.]

Did I mention no pre-written shit.....lmao..took you 20 min to check in....

[½ Crook]

U blow smoke like steam irons, no matter MY steez higher --
Dudes a joke...A Do can get PLAYED like street fighter --
Your a Street legend right? Get blown off the map --
So stop right a WAY...before approached with gats --
15 mins? You've had a whole daY, but Your rap is wack --
There's not much up for steak, cuz ur ass is grass --
The minute u talkin shit, I'm tempted to start rippin the rawest shit --
Expecting a blind post? Get beat with a walkin' stick --


Fuck it BS post holla

[½ Crook]

this was a key kid....not like a glued to the screen

[Taeisbeast.]

Quick key....meh...

Flows Synthetic..This Foes Pathetic..Cuz Crook Folds Unda Pressure Like Rookie Paramedics
....I'll Strip Your pride... Leave Your Ego Naked.... Till Ur A Sad Sex Symbol Like Bo Derek
....U Huge-Hefa, Ride A Bike In Mansions U Still Cant Bunny Hop If Ur Names Hugh Hefner
....Whos Better? This kid Just Leaves A Bunch Of Space In Threads Like A Loose-Sweater
Approach Ayduu Deep with Caution Indeed...Leave You Most-Hated Like Dawson In Creeks
I'll Beat You Twice, Crook Seek's A Three!,Hand You My Cap N You Still Couldnt Reach A Peak
...Get Smacked Silly Like Wives Who Cheat... Cuz Crook Aint Cuttin This Battle Or The Beef!
No Hiding, This Isnt A Game Of Seek, I'll Cut U Monday Threw Sunday Cause I Slay The Weak
....Come Wit Massive Flows...Like Hittin Cocks With Low Blows... Your Punches Aint Scorin
U've Shown The Crowd Boredom..U Still Couldnt Grill Me If You Got Help Off George Foreman

['Young Cell']

1/2



U blow smoke like steam irons, no matter MY steez higher --
Dudes a joke...A Do can get PLAYED like street fighter --

openier is really played man i hated it ...looking at the other lines..
15 mins? You've had a whole daY, but Your rap is wack --
There's not much up for steak, cuz ur ass is grass --
that line is funny as shit man lol...but on..The minute u talkin shit, I'm tempted to start rippin the rawest shit --
Expecting a blind post? Get beat with a walkin' stick --..this is a nice ending


Ayduu

you had some sick lines an punches where on point...multi wise you killed him also this shit right here ....U Huge-Hefa, Ride A Bike In Mansions U Still Cant Bunny Hop If Ur Names Hugh Hefner
....Whos Better? This kid Just Leaves A Bunch Of Space In Threads Like A Loose-Sweater this shit was really sick to me man...an this shit right here...
I'll Beat You Twice, Crook Seek's A Three!,Hand You My Cap N You Still Couldnt Reach A Peak
...Get Smacked Silly Like Wives Who Cheat... Cuz Crook Aint Cuttin This Battle Or The Beef!
No Hiding, This Isnt A Game Of Seek, I'll Cut U Monday Threw Sunday Cause I Slay The Weak

it was over after those lines that i read...

v/Ayduu

[Ill Techniquez]

this 1 was one sided
half crook wasnt bullshit, but ayduu was much better
alot more punchlines
v/ ayduu
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[AbusivE]

This was an ok battle, it was pretty much 1 sided tho... lemme break this down

Crook: You came ok i guess, your structure was pretty much perfect.. you were coming ok with those personals but you could have flipped them much better... punches were meh..

U blow smoke like steam irons, no matter MY steez higher --
Dudes a joke...A Do can get PLAYED like street fighter --
^was ok..

So stop right a WAY...before approached with gats --
15 mins? You've had a whole daY, but Your rap is wack --
^Gat line was a gay setup.. 2nd line was an ok personal, good concept but could have been worded so much better..

The minute u talkin shit, I'm tempted to start rippin the rawest shit --
Expecting a blind post? Get beat with a walkin' stick --
^good line



Ayduu: do i really need to explain this.. your wordplay is always strong, you took this battle with ease.. every line had a good punch with it, so i wont bother to quote any...

This battle was one sided, Ayduu came stronger in pretty much every category..

V/Ayduu

[½ Crook]

I hate You all.........................nice battle

[Taeisbeast.]

LMAO^^ Uppin yall # 1.....uppin......uppin......uppin

[Mighty King Esca]

Crooks verse was short and simple. You had some attempted punches, but nothing that stands out as strong. Didnt get very personal on your opponent, pretty general stuff you threw. Not much on multi's or wordplay, keep workin on all that stuff, punches most importantly

Ayduu-Nice opener, had some multi's pretty much throughout the verse rather than the typical last words of each line rhyming. Hits came through ok, original ideas and incorporated wordplay. Good verse here, consistant structure and nice flow.

Vote Ayduu.

[½ Crook]

this shit is over...nice battle...i shoulda dropped harder..*in conclusion*

fuck u all lol

[Taeisbeast.]

^^LMAO..i guess you should of. Anyway uppin # 2 peeps..i'll RTF

[Daft.]

Adyuu won this battle. He had better wordplay and also had better pucnhes. The punches all lacked that sense of being adressed at a personal level, but better none-the-less. The flow was straight, although his structure was weird, but everything was there. Crook was basic. Nothing special or complex or making me be like "damn, dude's got skill." It was just too basic against Adyuu.

v/Adyuu

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